OMG. I REALLY want to know what Jiraiya put on Tsunade's face. This shall be priceless. I also can't wait to see her kick his ** for it.

Fenix

Alright, so here it is. I started reading this story based on the summary, it gave a nice little teaser and I was intrigued by the potential plotline. The prologue was reasonably well done and made me want to read further into the story. I got to this chapter, but simply had to stop. It's not that the story itself is bad, in fact I think the idea is a very good one. However, I cannot get past all the randomly inserted author notes. They're not only visually distracting, but seriously interrupt the flow of the story. It's usually better to clearly articulate what the characters are doing IN the story, rather than relating it to something outside of it (IE referencing Pokemon, clearly not of the Naruto universe.) Also, many readers will understand what you mean when you're are describing character actions or emotiong, without a need for additional clarification in an author's note in the middle of a paragraph. If author's notes ARE necessary, they should be placed at the beginning or end of the story, preferably the end, with a small footnote to tie them to the content you're referencing. I think that this story has promise, but would recommend less random notes within the story and more content for the readers. Good luck!

Aw... is this story dead? :( But it's so much fun to read!!

LOL! I loved it! can't wait for the next chappie! please continue writing it. Just a thought for the fox's name, what about Kichi? it means lucky, I think.

I knew exactly what Ebisu's prank was, and I had a really close guess on Lee's! how about Kisu for the fox?

update soon, please. I'm waiting...
Great story

a good story tho i hope u continue it and update soon

O.O it's been 2 years since you updated! UPDATE! T_T

wow that was a really great story! But thank god i wasn't here when u didn't update for 2 years! That would have sucked. The chapters are really long witch is good! But i love the naruhina fluffiness. You should put it more aften even if its not what u think. The summary said. Naruhina in it right?(and others but talking bout them right now)usually stories tend to revolve around naruto and hinata in this story, but you didn't, witch acctually is origional!(Witch is good) I hate reading a story that is so simalar to another that i can guess what happens next. Yours was unique and I liked that! Nice story and keep going.(And please read my story, the one with more chapters, wish to see them sucks at first 1 or 2 chapters but gets better and fluffier)

is there going to be a nother story

very good

interesting story. i would have had them wait till they were 15 till they started dating but thats me though. anyway. good story. its been two years.

I LOVE IT ALREADY!
It has all my fave pairings and your writing skills are awesome!!
Hehe, but seriously, this is really good. And I'm only on the 2nd chapter xD

I loved this chapter. It was the one of the best chapters so far. I really wish you would update soon. I want to know what will happen with Sasuke when he comes back. If he changes at all.

Also who is Shino's girlfriend? Does he have one?

I don't know about the name. I am puzzled myself. Well good luck with that. Ja ne.