Whoa! awesome

Oh! Nice! Poor Sev! *sniffles* I've always liked Sev. He's so snarky! I liked the way you characterised Dumbledore. He was so strong and remorseful! Well done.

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It's so sweet! I've told you more than once, but you're wonderful with writing emotions! You always do a fantastic job with keeping the mood of the story fitting with the content!

You should definitively continue writing fanfics! I LOVE your story... *sob* :'(. Your value for detail and your beautiful language - great! My favourite line: "And it seems life is not without a cruel twist of irony for while you lived all your life a true Slytherin, you died a very self sacrificing Gryffindor." Oh my... *searches for handkerchief*... You are on my author alert and favourite stories-list now, btw..

Greetings,

XiaoGui

absolutely amazing... harnesses the emotion so well..

To answer your question, please do continue continue writing HP fics. I'm disappointed to not find more of them in your list and (as I may have mentioned previously) greatly look forward to reading more from you. The emotion you craft within your prose is very telling and well received by lovers of angst (and Snape fics), and H/C like myself. Keep it up!

I liked it, especially the Severitus touch at the end. Is this really your first fic? If it is then of course you should keep writing! The whole point of writing fanfics is to develope your writing style with characters that are already familiar to you. If you are interested in Severitus (snape as Harry's father, but I think you knew that) then write a fic based on it. It's a fast growing genre, right up there with Draco-as-a-veela. Don't worry about reviews much, the point is to write what you want as well as you can. If reading fics similar to the one you want to write helps (and I think it does)I can reccommend some fics to you.

Keep writing!

I loved your story, very poignant. I must admit I am intrigued by the last line. Even more so after reading your profile. I see you've started another HP story; please don't stop. I like your style and you stick to Canon which is always a plus.

Yes do continue writing...

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MORE!

I love how you explore the individual characters as well as show the personality of Snape through the reflections of other people. Excellent.

Interesting and very well-written, although I would have liked to know more about the "Good bye, father" part... Good job ! :-)