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Sakura Lisel 8/30/11 . chapter 1
Okay, Sasami's like a 2,000 year old princess, yet she acts like the little kid she looks like, instead of acting like an adult in a kids body... *lol* Just because everyone, including Tenchi, is too busy to play with her NOW like she wants them to, she thinks she's unimportant and runs away from home, like a little kid 1,986 years years younger than her would, instead of simply being MATURE and simply WAIT until everyone's NOT busy so they can play with her as she wants?
Taeniaea 11/20/10 . chapter 12
cool story
phonix2 9/29/10 . chapter 1
Absolutly brilliant story! I'm glad I found this story by accident. I'm no fan of DBZ but, I sure am a fan of sasami! Looking forward to reading the rest.
Trey Cooper 7/19/10 . chapter 12
Dude. I know i am reviewing this years later after i finished this but this is my all time favorite series of stories. I re-read this all the time on my psp because i love how you worked on such a great crossover. The only thing that bothered me was that Trunks and Sailor Saturn didn't work out in the end. But i hope one day you might pick back up and do some more kid stuff sequels.I would like to know how Ace ends up with Ayeka's daughter and all the other possible plot holes i seen that could be opened up. Anyway thank you man and keep up the good work
Moonprincess 3/21/04 . chapter 12
Love your fic. Though I think it should have been a Gohan/Chibi-Usa pairing, but no biggie!
Seeya! Moon_princess-
Sakura-Wars 2/16/04 . chapter 12
Love it! The pairings are PERFECT.
Akane 1/27/04 . chapter 12
Me like this! Me hope you write more of this! _
Juran 1/10/04 . chapter 12
I think you should write another story with the same fave xcouples G/S, and maybe this time a Vegeta/Washu pair-up!
Kikio 11/15/03 . chapter 12
KAAWAI! _
GUNDAMZERO 11/12/03 . chapter 12
Poor Gohan! How could you torture him like that?
Gokhan 11/11/03 . chapter 12
Its really funny the way Sasami is playing "hard to get" and torturing poor Gohan even though I think shes being a little TOO mean on him. _

it was too funny seeing the WAY of these two couples though I think you did it a little too short on them :(. Trunks/Yugi relationship was really the main couple of this story, which I never even heard much of these two couples. It was kinda funny how Trunks and Yugi were bonded because as long as Yugi can exist, no one can touch her except Trunks. :)

What really suck is that you torn off Vegetas and Washus relationship. And I dont even know why you pair up Vegeta with Hotaru since I notice how Vegeta was sounding a bit Way OOC because he was being TOO nice to Hotaru. "Too nice" is NOT Vegetas Style!

I really like the story but you have to make a sequel and fix this relationship and FAST!
SuperFlash1246 10/29/03 . chapter 12
The chapters from 1 to 3 was running smoothly, but when chapter 4 and above started to appear, the story was beginning to Suck! I cant believe you made Gohan and the girls grow up so fast, and it was pretty interesting too and the fact that I like them more when their kids. Not only that, but you made Washu and Vegetas relationship go puff. No offense, I like this story but it would have been interesting though. You wanted to make Chibi-Trunks part of the story as well and I can see that its mainly focus about him as the story progresses. I really like how you pair him up with Yugi! _ there really arent any Chibi-Trunks/Yugi fics out there and its really hard to find. overall, the story is great but next time, Please make a Vegeta/Washu pairing, I think these two has bit in common in some ways.

And of course dont forget about Gohan/Sasami pairings, I think these two has so much in common. Personally I think Gohan is better of with her rather than Videl! But you see, there from different Animes. _

I wish you good luck! :)
Hiei 9/30/03 . chapter 12
This story was great, although you did focus to Much on Chibi Trunks, that you didnt even bother making a few Washu/Vegeta story chapters in this story. Gohan and Sasami is okay, but Washu/Vegeta was not totally focus to this story. :(
Ko-Chan 9/28/01 . chapter 1
I like. n-n
god of the 7 elements 9/23/01 . chapter 1
cool fic
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