Hi

I really like your story but u should definetly add to it and I think Vna should drop into hitomi bedroom and take her back to gaea with him.

so what happened to merle and every one eles?

Hey the story is good, but somehow I don't like that ending.Can't you change it?

What's wrong with your story! It's a good story, but why aren't the links working for chapter 7 and up!

What's wrong with your story! It's a good story, but why aren't the links working for chapter 7 and up!

What's wrong with your story! It's a good story, but why aren't the links working for chapter 7 and up!

What's wrong with your story! It's a good story, but why aren't the links working for chapter 7 and up!

What's wrong with your story! It's a good story, but why aren't the links working for chapter 7 and up!

A very good story I have reed it all you are a good witer he keet goin bye

I like how u portrayed VAN in this story, Hitomi too. Story's pretty good so far.

There I submitted a review, happy now?

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OMG! OK That ended so much ummm like I din't think it would... yeah like that made sence! O well! yeah I havn't read this for like so long! Its very cool that its over... and Im surprised I accully read somthing to the end! Well anyway! Great story!

The whole thing was a-a-DREAM? All that a dream? Nooo! I was hoping the ending would be a little bit more original and exciting, especially coming from you. But anyways, I did have to go back to the first chapter to figure out the prolouge cause I had read it a while ago. And I'm guessing Hitomi is Jin's half-sister, right? Well, do you think maybe you could add another part to this saying it wasn't a dream cause all that being a dream was kinda disappointing. Other than that, you know I loved it all! *Maura*

OH PLEASE STAY DONT GO PLEASE IM BEGING AS FAR AS I CAN SEE THE STORYS REALLY GO I HOPE THIS HELPS JUST IN CASE OH AND I LISTEND TO THAT SONG ITS REALLY GOOD SO GOOD I WROTE DOWN THE ADDRESS SO I CAN VIST_

wow, it took me a while to figure out the ending, but now i understand... at least i think that i do. so is Hitomi Jin's half-sister or something? i'm really not sure about that, but it kinda came together when i remembered a kid was reading how Gaea came to be and someone had to fill in the kid named... Kell (i think) what happened in the story so far, and they had to start the story over again. the story is really good.

Ok... What just happend? I really don't get it. Do you mean that the whole story was just a DREAM! That sucks! Will you please rewrite the ending so that it a least makes sence. _