Looks good...

I really liked your story :) Is it ever going to be continued? Please do.

Wow...I've never read a story like yours before. Fascinating ideas...I can't wait to see how the relationships develop in this alternate universe. Please update soon!

This is quite an interesting story! I notice you're starting to really get paradox going now. Hope you manage to post some more soon. How will things turn out now, I wonder...

Great story so far, but please hurry up and update. =P
Oe thing I'd like to ask/point out: in 'Harry Potter and the Mind Mage', James Milton can't do spells that because physical damage because the pain travels through him. So have you got a reason to how in this he can, or is there differeces between this character and the HPMM one?

Oh, this is so good! I really hope Tess gets around telling Remus she knows what he is, and that she doesn't care, and that Sirius and Amanda get together and that James and Lily doesn't die and that Frank and Alice don't go insane and that you update very soon. LOL.

good story. i'm glad you're updating again... would like to see more sirius (the recent one)...
It's a little frustrating to see everything get messed up, though.

Aw, poor Lils! :( Are Amandas parents all right?
Sirius kind of deserved that curse, but I still feel bad for the way she got back at him

Stupid stupid stupid Moody...what kind of idiot overlooks the fact that alot of people are going to be killed if he doesn't listen?

Bad bad James. A PROSTITUTE?!?! *shock* LoL

So, when does Tess find out where he works?

Tonks is such a perceptive little one. Is anyone else going to recognise him?

Silly Remus...scared to tell her the truth. Understandable, but silly. :P She's smarter than that...

I'm liking the Mind Mage 'prequel' BTW.

Sirius and Amanda in class together is always interesting. Hehehe

Sorry about that last review, I was a little wired and that's only the largest understatement of the century.

I LOVED that last line, very ominous and very true for the place and the situation. I also liked the way you explained Tonk's metamorphosis, or what prompted it anyway.

I'm curious though, when are Amanda and Sirius and James and Lily going to get together? Unless . . . the course of actions that returned Sirius has set in motion keeps these two couples from uniting until after the fall of Voldemort when it would be therefore SAFE for them to have children. Or they just realize too late that they should have gotten together earlier.

::thinks::

I really hope that it's option one. Update soon! I can't wait to see what will happen next!

This is far too much for my wimpy little brain to handle during the summer. I'm confused: did or did Andromeda not reconize Sirius? It makes sense for everything that he effects to have happened somehow that same way the first time around. So all the stuff he purposfully does is the stuff that changes everything but the accidental stuff seems to have already happened. Just finished reading Romeo and Juliet and this reminds me of it because of fate. So basically there is stuff that Sirius (James Evans) did the first time around like accidentally giving Tonks her scar and now he has sort of come back aagain and is changing it even more? Is this anything like the time turner in book three except more complicated? Is James Milton going to meet Remus in Knockturn Alley? What about Sirius/James Evans, he seems pretty close by. While he is running so Andromeda won't see him could he possibly take a turn down Knockturn Alley where Milton is staying and Lupin is working? Well it is good to have ya back, please update soon, can't wate to read more. oh, and what about left in the middle are there going to be any more chapters? It seemed to be both a bit of a beginning and a bit of an ending at the same time. Well, please update soon!
~Perenelle

OMG you're gonna kill me! you have to write the next one soon! i'm imagine all kinds of things! and it's good to know that my english aint that back. To answer you "question", i suposse we can call it that way, you're on the right track! and if you keep the suspense you'll have one less reader XD (just joiking)
By the way... the scene with Tonks, it was realy Sirius both times? or is just coincidence?

Where is our loveable werewolf pal working?

I love the story. It's very good. I imagine that the things Sirius does in what he thinks is his present is what he remembers from his past. So he has to go to the past and realizes that he fits in the past, because in the past is his future.

Kind of like in Kate and Leopold. Also like when Harry and Hermione used the time turner.

I just started reading this story, but I am already very intrigued. It's a very creative idea (and a great twist on time travel-ish fics) and I look forward to reading the rest.

Didn't he nearly kill her in the past? while running around as a werewolf? and whats this about James and a hooker? what the hell has Sirius done to screw up the past so royaly?

'sigh' I"m not about to get any solid answers from you am I? {Wry Grin} We'll I guess that I'm just going to have to do the same thing everyone else does and wait for the next chapter or two... You really have me cunfused as to your intensions though.

Anyway, Love your portrayal of Milton and... Oh **! I just realized what your doing! Your setting it up so that NEVIL is the Porphiesied one aren't you? your going to remove harry from the story entirely!

Thats just cruel, do you know that? that really is Just To Cruel... 'sigh' Here's hoping that I'm reading you wrong. Keep up the good work. your an excellent writer, even if I may not like the direction I think your taking this story. :)