Very cute story! While not being over-the-top, it carries much of the insanity the original series has. You write with a very distinct Gravitation FEEL. :)

:) I like this - it's a good story! A vacation, and the two of them are in character great :D Thank-you for writing this x

Brilliant!

Lol, I loved this story it was so funny. I kept having to cover my mouth cuz my mom was sleeping. But wow excellent job!

This is one of my favorite and best gravitation stories I've ever read! This made me laugh countless times. I loved how they were always caught in some bizzare situation every chapter! ^^ I loved this story! great job ;D

Kawaii!~

Yay, my favorite chapter!

"Holy freaking **, Shuichi!! I'm DRIVING! What the hell do you think you're doing??"

Shuichi, hanging on his lover's shoulder, refused to let go. "Kiss me," he demanded.

"I said, 'I'm DRIVING.'"

"I said, 'Kiss me.'"

"I. Am. Driving. As in, looking at the ROAD and not your FACE, so that I might steer this goddamn ugly car in such a way that it will not go off the road and lead to both of our deaths!"

LOL. xD That part, the end when Shuichi thought Yuki was a bear, their sex in the car, and the part with the lab mice are personally my FAVORITE parts in any story. I even dreamt this story's plot once. xD

"Damn him. Only Shuichi could look so cute while looking like such a complete retard." I love that line. xD

xD I'm reading this story for maybe (not exaggerating) the 12th time. It just... it's so great! The chapter with the lab mice is my favorite.

This is my absolute favorite Gravitation fanfic so far. It had just the right balance of humor, fluff, and drama for the entire 17 chapters, and the length feels just right, not too short or too long. And you managed to keep both Shuichi and Yuki in character for the entire story, which is not an easy thing to do. The fluff and touches of lime were very well-done, the humor had me cracking up at parts (some of the lines were priceless!), and I finished reading the story with a warm, fuzzy feeling.

In short, a fantastic story!

Plz dont poke my eye 0.0 i´m sleepy and cant go on reading T.T

hahahaha the cow

Wow...that was really good. You did a great job with the characters! Nice Shu and Yuki. Keep up the good work and write some more stories! ^_^

oh wow, this has got to be one of the GREATEST fics I've ever read *claps* it had everything, humour, emotion heck it was all there and am really impressed at how you were able to blend them all toghether and come up with such a beautiful stroy, you've made my day and left me smilimg involuntary after each chapter, thank you, thank you, thank you ever so much for a tremendously enjoyable read! *glomps the author* you have my deepest respect *applauds so vigorously hands ache*
~am really sorry I didn't review after each chapter, but I must admit you're threats were pathetically cute! ^ _ ^ I might use them, the main emphasis is you're a great author.