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wildkidlexie
2009-06-25 . chapter 1
^_^

cute
Riyoku-kun
2007-08-17 . chapter 1
Simply adorable. ^^
I love baby-Kenshin. -ignores the fact that he's 11...-
'-'x
2005-09-10 . chapter 1
Swet! ^-^x
EmySabath
2005-09-06 . chapter 1
Oh, I loved this!! It was so great; I remember all those little tidbits Hiko mentioned in that scene and thinking that there must be some interesting stories behind them. Thanks for writing one, especially in such an amusing and believable way. Kudos!
Kokiri
2005-06-19 . chapter 1
Aw, poor Kenshin^^ I remember cracking up over Hiko "strolling down memory lane" and embarrassing his baka deshi. Absolutely loved the last few lines:

"Oh, the joys of raising a child. For now, he would comort the boy, help him clean up, put him back to bed, and hope that he would be able to get some sleep before the sun rose. For now, he would be the perfect loving, caring guardian.

After all, there would be plenty of opportunities to tease the boy about this later."

So very Hiko^^ Well done.
Insert Creativity Here
2005-02-05 . chapter 1
XD LOL XD LOL

I just *love* Hiko's sneaky mind... ^^ This is very amusing indeed.
Jep
2004-11-29 . chapter 1
oh! cute! love it!
Sakura Shinguji-Albatou
2004-11-10 . chapter 1
Aw, how cute! I do remember that particular episode...it had me rolling around the ground laughing. Imagine, the infamous Hitokiri Battousai wetting the bed...anyway, this was a really cute story! Good job! *Gives a cookie--or even more appropriate, gives a rice ball*
Lucrecia LeVrai
2004-10-29 . chapter 1
Aw, /of course/ I remember that scene... *grins* ...Anyway, it was such a nice, sweet story! Poor, poor Kenshin! ^_^
Blaze Coyotlhart
2004-08-29 . chapter 1
Hee hee! Lil' Kenshin sneakin' around. How cute!^_^
Aw, and we got to see the kind and understanding side of hiko-sama's personality! Overall I it was very cute and funny! Well done!^_^
Wistful-Eyes
2004-07-22 . chapter 1
Oh, that was fun. I loved that part in the Kyoto Arc when Hiko was teasing Kenshin about his bed wetting...(and poison mushrooms!) seeing Kenshin upset like that is fun to see. (I feel sort of guilty taking pleasure from Kenshin's embaressment. o_o) I always thought he'd try and smuggle the blanket out if he wet the bed. I didn't picture him so weepy though. ^^; But he must be super embaressed. Well, cyz!
Jen
2004-07-12 . chapter 1
Hilarious!
SeraphAngel
2004-07-10 . chapter 1
Fantastic. Very amusing story.

I love how Kenshin thinks of Hiko as "-him-". It's got that whole dramatic feel to it.

Great character development for such a short piece.

I loved reading this. Compliments on doing such a good job!
Liem
2004-07-10 . chapter 1
Hahaha, I do remember that time when Hiko reminded Kenshin about wetting his bed. This really was a nice story, and I was laughing at the last part:

Oh, the joys of raising a child. For now, he would comort the boy, help him clean up, put him back to bed, and hope that he would be able to get some sleep before the sun rose. For now, he would be the perfect loving, caring guardian.

After all, there would be plenty of opportunities to tease the boy about this later.
Yugi the Other White Meat
2004-07-10 . chapter 1
Yay! I LOVE Hiko! This was really well written, and the length fit perfectly with what you were trying to get across. Good work!

"Kenshin hadn't wet his bed in months. Hiko had thought for sure that they were finally over that rather embarressing problem."

Ha ha! I loved it! And so did my friend Super Sheba, who says she's too lazy to review... So count this review as two. Again, great job!
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