|Reviews for Rewards|
| Larna Mandrea 7/21/04 . chapter 10
Great, great job. I'm only sorry its through! How sweet though... the Lily thing was really unexpected, but I'm so glad we got our Prongs back. *grins madly* Thanks for your hard work! Wonderful job!
| pixiejazz 7/21/04 . chapter 10
Great Chapter! This was an awesome fic! I think you should write a sequel, that way we can see the marauders, lily, harry, hermione, ron etc., and see how they interact. AND we wouldn't have to see slimy old horrible wormtail cuz he would be gone, gone away! I want to see harry interacting with his parents who are now only a few years older than him and see how that works. OH! and if you do do a sequel, could you maybe have some harry/hermione shipping. Maybe have them starting to date, like their first date and the marauders and lily and ron(but i think it would be better if ron already knew) find out and all put in their two cents about it...well...yea...GREAT STORY! SEQUEL SOON!
| Talliana 7/21/04 . chapter 10
I like this story really. Some Remus Pov..
Just.. to little of Harry ;)
| volleypickle16 7/20/04 . chapter 10
Hey great chapter! I loved this story!
| poet at heart 7/20/04 . chapter 10
A sequel would be an awesome thing
| Dalamar's Mercy 7/20/04 . chapter 10
Huh, maybe if I gushed instead of critizied...LOL, no, it's the beta reader with in me.
Well, okay, just a few spelling errors I noted...nothing major, it's all good.
First one (all in this chapter)
Are you really looking for bread in the cutlery draw?" I ask him. (
| Dalamar's Mercy 7/20/04 . chapter 4
I'm likin'this so far. I'll admit, your style is a bit awkward to get used to (it feels choppy...but I'm assuming that's because of the type of story it is) and I'm not primarily a slash liker...for harry potter that is. *winks*
I'm reviewing this early because you wanted mistakes...and I'm not sure but I think this phrase here:
I close my eyes. Harry does know it, but James once asked me the very same question. But then, of course, Sirius was alive and James spoke in present tense. Hell, James was alive too.
It should be "Harry doesn't know it", instead of "Harry does know it".
Keep it up!
| Cairn87 7/20/04 . chapter 9
Great story, mate, but I object to you suggesting it was my fault... It was clearly Paul's. Anyway, do a full moon chapter! ;p
| DemonButtercup 7/19/04 . chapter 9
oh its great! i was kind of wondering how you would manage to bring him back from the dead, but you seem to have pulled it off very well! is james gonna come back?
| Miss Anonymous hp 7/18/04 . chapter 9
*grins* Lovely story! I'm absolutely in love with it. Poor Remus; I wanted to hug him but it turns out he got his hug! Aw... Remus and Sirius are SO cute. So is Lily & James... *hint*hint* Okay, so that wasn't exactly "subtle"... Oh well! Do continue.
| Bane-Huntress 7/18/04 . chapter 9
Wow... This story is just astounding, and I had to say I think it was the end of chapter 7 that had me in snivaly tears, and I dont cry easly!
Please do an epiloge to this wonderful peace, I think we need it for all the wonderful angst you have put us through!
*hugs* thankyou for writing this!
| Ikki 7/18/04 . chapter 9
I loved it
| ruemaja 7/18/04 . chapter 9
Oh! he's back! yey! I'm happy! this is nice! write more please! :-)) thanks!
| Syringe 7/17/04 . chapter 9
Oh wow this is an awesome story... please write more soon! I want to find out what happens!
| volleypickle16 7/17/04 . chapter 9
Hey great chapter! i hope you write soon!