Woah. this story is so good. The way you decribed every thing made me feel as if I was really there watching this story unfold before my own eyes. You are a very talented writer. keep up the good work! ^_^

Very descriptive! Sorry that's all I have to say, I'm falling asleep reading.

I love the way you describe the atmosphere around them. How you make the simple changing of the sky's colors into some much more intricate and beautiful. The conversation between the two men is amazing, admitting to being in love and such. Squall is very much in character, so much that I could almost picture this being a scene in the game. This fic is wonderful. I'm glad I took the time to look at some of your work. Bravo.

This is the best fanfiction I have ever read. Period.

Very, very good. Just like the other two fictions you've written. I love your work.

I figured I'd re-review it... *sniffle* You're so mean to my 'Guna. *sniffle* But true to the characters. Love ya Pandy, write more, damn you. :P

I'm in awe, the writing is captivating and Squall is portrayed beautifly...just wow...

I read this story before. I loved it then, I love it now. It deals with the Laguna-Squall father-son topic in such a beautiful and realistic way, and all the details in your writing and the description of the surroundings makes it seem like you're there with them, standing on the sideline and watching. The questions Squall asks to himself and his anger, his thoughts about Rinoa... And the way he contradicts himself in the end by mourning his mother... I enjoyed that especially.

Wow, Pandora! WOW! This was awesome! Squall and Laguna were both so in character, it was great! I can totally picture him reacting the way he did. I especially liked when he said, "Your son is dead. He died a long time ago. All that’s left is his name." Oh, what a slap to the face that must have been for Laguna. Great job!

excellent, profound, enchanting, illuminating, poignant, and masterful! two thumbs up, way up! *checks "add story to favorites"*

This is absolutely the most amazing fanfic I have read in my wntire life, and, in fact, that I have read at all, in quite some time. This is absolutely beautiful and introspective. The characters are so well potrayed, their feelings so clear and understood. I'm in awe. You shouldn't be writng fanfiction, you should be famous.

Wow.

You have a magnificent way with words! I mean, your imagery is amazing, and all in all this was just wonderfully done! You portrayed Squall very well, and i think the way you played out the situation was very probable and just very touching :) Keep on writting, you are a really talented author!

I see! you read my story cause it had the same name as yours!! I did the same.. cool though..I liked it!!

Isn't chaptering grand....? Eh. Anyway at least I got to reread this. ^_^