So... can I assume that you plan on updating this, eventually?

I agree with Stratagemini, but how could you leave us hanging like that? It's not quite a cliffhanger, but closer to it than a real stopping point.

Otherwise, as Stratagemini said, it's leaps and bounds above what passes for average here on and good by any standard -- except in that it is incomplete, and apparently (a single tear drops) abandoned.

You've just recently been added to the Penultimate Ranma Archive Indew. That's where I found this story, and I must say the the story itself has a lot of potential.

The feel of it echoes several other Ranma stories I've enjoyed, Show of Ranma, The Shadow Chronicles, Relatively Absent, and Eldritch Asylum just to name a few.

You have something unique among fanfiction here. You have a truely good piece of writing, a far cut above the majority of mediocre writing one usually encounters when trawling among stories. It is stories like this one that have kept me reading fanfiction, even when faced with figurative armies of badly written stories. And for that, I thank you.

I hope you continue writing soon.

Hmm, and the Nerima crew just digs itself deeper. Poor Akari and her father. Although I'm curious; what would happen now if Cologne employed the Contrary Jewel?

Very well done. I especially like the length of the chapters. Hope to read more soon.

Hmm... Pretty good story but...

Prologue makes it all kinda pointless: we know it'll be story about destruction of civilization - not exactly good way to attract new readers... I nearly stopped reading in the middle of prologue.

o.O Wow. That's some serious sh#t the Nerima Crew's getting into. Nice writing.
Don't feel too bad, I don't get a whole lot of reviews either. It works out to about two reviews per posted chapter.
To italicize and indent, or to keep it that way, I've found fanfiction.net's templates work best when you save your work as HTML. You get the spacings between paragraphs and whatever things you use tend to stay put.

This is an extremely interesting story, very well written and I'm sure quite thought out. You've managed to keep the characters true to the manga (in my opinion at least) and have weaved a story unlike any other I have read. I hope to see you continue this as I am quite hooked on it ^ ^.

Absolutely FABULOUS story. Why it only has five reviews, I don't know, but it deserves loads more. I don't know if the Ranma/Akane storyline is going to take great presidence in this fic, but maybe changing the genre to fantasy/romance might attract more readers? Totally up to you, though, of course.

Anyway, the plot is moving along quite interestingly, though I'm scared to find out what's going to happen to the Nerima gang that's going to lead to the events in the prologue!

I liked Ryouga's deep introspective moment in the previous chapter. Great insight into his character. And great characterisation of Ranma and especially Akane. See? She isn't a raging psycho. :D

Keep up the wonderful work!

Italicize: (open angle bracket)i(close angle bracket) at the start, then (open angle bracket)/i(close angle bracket) at the end. It's HTML for it, but it worked (last time i tried...which is awhile ago, but anyway).
On the story (there's a story?) Interesting, but I admit that the setup behind the whole secret demon society thing didn't quite get my interest. I suppose it could happen, but it was just kinda random, shrug. Anyway, it definately looks likes it (the story, not the secret society) is going places. I have to admit that I was kinda waiting until stuff started happening-not too much 'special' has taken place. Just some fights and characterization stuff, not too much overarching plot *shrug*.

You've caught my interest. I look forward to seeing the next chapter.

a great story with a lot of grief, like the explantion on why ranma and the gang have certain hangup becuase of demons being implanted into their souls. i'm confuse as to why ryoga demon didn't come out consider how close he camt to dying and what might happen when he recovers.

ARG! If someone can tell me how to do paragraph breaks on this site, it would be most appreciated. Half of chapter two came out as one bid friggin paragraph, which was not what was intended.

Hmm, this story shows a lot of potential. I like what you've done to start the story as well. Please continue, I'm eager to read the rest of the story!

Tyler.