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| bluewith 2008-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseUpdate please... This is nice... |
| savannah 2008-02-08 ch 16, anon. | abusegreat story! keep it coming |
| Nils 2007-12-13 ch 16,  | abuseAmazing story! I really mean it. There's every thing- love, mystery, thriller, a little of drama. I mean, it's just too good! But one thing I noticed was that you make many mistakes in your tenses. And there are a few grammatical mistakes too. I hope you take this positively and look into your mistakes to correct them. This is what one of my reviewers told me too! I have that problem too. So there's no problem in making mistake if you correct them and don't make the same mistakes again! Hoping to read your next chapter, Regards, Nils P.S: The pair (Ranma and Akane) is real hot in your story! Keep it up! |
| quistis-fantasy 2007-11-23 ch 16, anon. | abuseoh gosh..i want more...great job although there are a few mistakes..keep going.. |
| Emily 2007-11-09 ch 16, anon. | abuseHey Great story, I hope you update very soon :) |
| wasu 2007-11-03 ch 16, | abusehi I love it awesome ,really!! so please update very soon and keep it up bye wasu ps. brilliant work,really! |
| Akanne-Anne 2007-10-29 ch 16, anon. | abuseHi Chette-chan! Great work! ^-^ The twist from romantic to dark to angsty was terrific! Hope to read more of your works! :) |
| Dbano 2007-10-26 ch 16, anon. | abuseThis fanfic has a happy ending right because I think that Filipinos likes happy endings like me. |
| zaltran 2007-10-17 ch 16, anon. | abuseIngnore the baka who is vomiting. Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapter. |
| thereviewergirl 2007-10-04 ch 16, | abuseoh my. why on earth is akane like that? shocks... i wish she'd give ranma a second change... i wish she'd let ranma explain... ranma might not be able to handle all this sh*t and he might go to drastic measures like suicide or something... but maybe that'll be what it takes to make akane see that they're really meant to be... please update soon... :) |
| capt. n 2007-10-03 ch 16, | abusePuts ChanChanandMosasi up against a wall, and opens fire with a nuclear bomb. Why did you do that, why? You've got all the characters right, but why? Are you trying to win the Gendo Ikari award for basteredness? WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY? |
| Weeaboo Murder Suspect 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseUGGHH This fanfic is SATURATED in Japanglish, I wanna vomit! JESUS KID, pick a ** language and speak it the rest of the damned fic! You're not Japanese and further more you're not even speaking it correctly, SO stop being WAPANESE. |
| Pure 'n' White 2007-10-03 ch 16, | abuseyay! another chapter ^^ I re-read the whole story today, to refresh my mind. Update sooner :P ♥ |
| Speed Reader 2007-10-02 ch 16, anon. | abuseYour fanfics coming along nicely. |
| Streaming Radiant Fire 2007-05-06 ch 9, | abuseDUMDUMDUM!DADADUM! |