|Reviews for Please and Thank You|
| Kunshi Sekijou 8/4/11 . chapter 1
Wow. Very unique style you have here.
It is stories like yours that makes me want to read out loud.
Thank you for a pleasant read. XD
| lemon-rind 8/31/09 . chapter 1
real well done. liked it, hated the scene but it was entrancing.
| dicingalice 1/6/09 . chapter 1
this was heart-wrenching!
_ more? please?
| NeverNight 12/26/08 . chapter 1
It's too late for please, so "Thank you."
| alydhe 11/14/08 . chapter 1
Wow, this is so good. Poor Shika. I really hope Chouji wakes up. Write a sequel? Please?
| MissBMarie 3/26/08 . chapter 1
I can honestly say I loved this.
It was so beautifully written. The structure in it's entirely was perfect, his thoughts and actions, and the breathing scenes, perfectly placed. A very moving story. I only wish there was more!
Bravo my dear, I positively loved it.
| Raiment 12/28/07 . chapter 1
I have to say you're becoming one of my favorite authors...excellent as always.
| DDDDDDD 11/1/07 . chapter 1
I really love this.
It flows very well with the occasional rise and fall.
It was sad.
I really don't know what else to say.
| ragamuffin009 4/21/07 . chapter 1
| StarsOfYaoi 9/2/06 . chapter 1
aw, that was really wonderful.
short, but i love the way it's placed down. shikamaru's thoughts are he watches his best friend fighting against death, and worrying whether he will wake up or not (too scared to admit he could as well die).
wonderful shot, really, one could feel the emotions dripping from each of shika's thoughts.
thanks for writing it.
| Paper Fans 7/14/06 . chapter 1
So sweet! There isnt enough ShikaChou shounen-ai in the world!
| wellduh 11/17/05 . chapter 1
These two have the best relationship ever. I firmly thought so before reading this and sure as hell think it now.
"But here and now, sitting in a cheap plastic chair and watching the other’s chest rise and fall and rise and fall and . . .
Rise. Please rise.
That? That is as close to a perfect sentence (sentences, whatever) as I've seen. Wow. The rise-fall theme was used brilliantly.
Keep it up.
| Freez-DeathLiver 11/2/05 . chapter 1
;.; I think it was awsome and Chouji is way better then Shikamaru. hmph .
| Jakotsu Higurashi 10/6/05 . chapter 1
THAT'S JUST GROS!
WAIT A SEC THIS MY STORY...HEHEHE_
LOVE THE SHIKIMARA!
| ToCryCrimsonTears 9/13/05 . chapter 1
I really liked this one. I could see shikmaru worrying over that