 ImCutePoison 2009-11-25 . chapter 1I like it! I like the last two sentences. ;] |
 xChamx 2009-11-21 . chapter 1You made it so simple yet, so complex(does that even make sense?:0)
I can imagine Sasuke acting like that, trying to be kind but in a blunt way. I especially liked how you added in the idea that he would take of Hinata, making her realise how important that would be to him as his only remaining family. And the anyone can love anyone line, just because its true :) Very well done, and brilliant :D |
 betwixtnbtw 2009-11-11 . chapter 1awesome awesome and awesome! best one shot i ever read with these 2. i really wish it was more than just a one shot tho cuz the way u write about hinata and sasuke is really how i could c them acting. i cud definitely c sasuke acing like the way he does in your fic before orochimaru returned to konoha and made him all power hungry. they said 3 sentences to each other and it was still really sweet. i pretty sure your not gonna update after 5 years but your story is so good. can't hurt to ask right?
100th review!
update plz |
 ww 2009-10-08 . chapter 1 You write very beautifully, and did a good job portraying how the two characters might react believably. It's quiet and undramatic, and shows the two of them making the best of the situation they find themselves in. |
 bLue Li9Ht 2009-09-15 . chapter 1Wow, great, they're so in character, and make sense, and it's really possible to happen ^^
*fave& |
 lady-ribbon 2009-08-10 . chapter 1Absolutely BRILLIANT.
This entire story can be summed up by the last lines:
Fact of life: nothing ever really goes as expected.
Fact of life: this is not the end of the world.
ende
. : anyone can love anyone : .
Everything about this story, especially the way you wrote it, is stunning. It's so simple, out of the blue, random and makes complete sense. I like how everything is not going to be perfect, but they'd still work it out in the end. It wasn't over descriptive, yet it hit all the right notes.
It started off slow and awkward between both them, and gradually moved through their relationship flawlessly.
This is an instant favorite, and I'm going for author alert. |
 mistressofdarkness962 2009-07-29 . chapter 1This story is amazing. It captured a point of view of hinata's and Sasuke's relationship quite well. |
 ClockRepair 2009-07-22 . chapter 1I don't know exactly what to say, it's such a great story! Love it! |
 Lilamedusa 2009-04-21 . chapter 1Yeah, I luvd it. So much I'll add it to my fav list. Yeah, I know it's not too much but hoy have so many reviews... lol |
 Hayazakashi Rukio 2009-03-17 . chapter 1How cute..^^
Great job.. It was simple and just like, filled with emotions all at the same time..^^
-Rukio |
 A Highly Inportant Person 2009-01-21 . chapter 1 It was good bur, I was hoping for something different. Just saying. |
 blackraven615 2008-11-11 . chapter 1Lovely. Was simple and amazing. |
 Anon E. Mouse 2008-10-24 . chapter 1 First of all, you have to know, I don't usually like Sasuhina stuff. Correction-I usually hate it with every fiber of my being. But you are an extraordinary writer, so I clicked on this. And...wow. This totally blew me away! The emotions were so real and moving (plus, Sasuke is so cute as a heavy sleeper! Not in a hot way-he's younger than me). But good job, and I liked the part with Sakura and Ino. It just seemed very real to me. |
 starchain 2008-10-05 . chapter 1I can't believe how well you made them work. 'Cause usually these two are a little awkward together, but you made it flow so well. =D
This was gorgeous. Sasuke was really IC with his attempts at niceness - I loved when he just wrote "BED" on the paper. XD And I really liked how you noted the different colors of the bento boxes... that was making me smile the whole way through.
Thanks for writing XD I loved it. |
 The Penumbra 2008-09-24 . chapter 1Hurrah! A fantastic SasuHina fic :D Well done! |