You write very beautifully, and did a good job portraying how the two characters might react believably. It's quiet and undramatic, and shows the two of them making the best of the situation they find themselves in.

Wow, great, they're so in character, and make sense, and it's really possible to happen ^^

*fave&

Absolutely BRILLIANT.
This entire story can be summed up by the last lines:
Fact of life: nothing ever really goes as expected.


Fact of life: this is not the end of the world.

ende

. : anyone can love anyone : .

Everything about this story, especially the way you wrote it, is stunning. It's so simple, out of the blue, random and makes complete sense. I like how everything is not going to be perfect, but they'd still work it out in the end. It wasn't over descriptive, yet it hit all the right notes.
It started off slow and awkward between both them, and gradually moved through their relationship flawlessly.
This is an instant favorite, and I'm going for author alert.

This story is amazing. It captured a point of view of hinata's and Sasuke's relationship quite well.

I don't know exactly what to say, it's such a great story! Love it!

Yeah, I luvd it. So much I'll add it to my fav list. Yeah, I know it's not too much but hoy have so many reviews... lol

How cute..^^

Great job.. It was simple and just like, filled with emotions all at the same time..^^

-Rukio

It was good bur, I was hoping for something different. Just saying.

Lovely. Was simple and amazing.

First of all, you have to know, I don't usually like Sasuhina stuff. Correction-I usually hate it with every fiber of my being. But you are an extraordinary writer, so I clicked on this. And...wow. This totally blew me away! The emotions were so real and moving (plus, Sasuke is so cute as a heavy sleeper! Not in a hot way-he's younger than me). But good job, and I liked the part with Sakura and Ino. It just seemed very real to me.

I can't believe how well you made them work. 'Cause usually these two are a little awkward together, but you made it flow so well. =D

This was gorgeous. Sasuke was really IC with his attempts at niceness - I loved when he just wrote "BED" on the paper. XD And I really liked how you noted the different colors of the bento boxes... that was making me smile the whole way through.

Thanks for writing XD I loved it.

Hurrah! A fantastic SasuHina fic :D Well done!

This was so sweet. I love SasuHina, but this is probably the best I've read. Good job.

that was so beautiful ;-;

will there maybe be a story for this? y'know cuz this would make a really good story

Very nice, short, sweet and to the point.