I really hope ul update soon this looks like itll get very intresting :) il put u on my story thing an keep an eye out for ur next update :)

rite more

i love this story. hurry up and update, please. again great story. love tori

awesome how about that gohan can turn ss2 but he kepts it a secret

I like the story,it is really cool,but I am ABSOLUTLY DYING to know what happens next. PLZ update soon. : )

ok few points to say here

1) ur NOT a moron and that Vampire dude is just a total jerk. its called Fanfiction for a reason, hes the moron not u!

2) is Videl a saiyan. i don't think she is coz then she wouldn't be a new servant but an older servant.

3) i'm NOT TALENTED!

4) i'll be online a bit more now. love ya

Update when u can i like where this is going

love ya!

gohan so sweet

This story is really good so far! I cant wait for the next chapter! Bye! ;)

heh I do review alot of it. anyways, is Videl a saiyan in this one? thats really the only thing i want to know, but i suppose you'll be telling us later.

anyways good job, keep writing.

Okay, so Gohan grew up Saiyan but he kept his kindness. Good compromise. Though I hope to see him act more Saiyan than in the series. And what a nice twist to bring a Saiyan Videl into the story. I'm curious to see where this will lead.

Update when you get the chance.

thats a cool story i can't wait to read more:)

Very interesting. cant wait to see more.

Good work, keep it coming.

really good! but i would'nt say chichi was evil just...ok ya shes evil

Wow... This is GREAT! I really hope you can continue! This story is awesome! Please update soon!

sounds like a good start hope the next chapters longer though