LOVE IT- cant wait to read the next chapter >w

Very interesting story you have going, but you might want to look into a beta to check over punctuation. I hope that you eventually come back to this and finish it!

My-OH-My, I am completely engulfed in the beautiful story you have set out for us!! The suspense is sure to kill me~! ^_~ The angst and the pull between our beloved Sora's is so enticing!!

I feel like Riku, stuck. Lol~!!

Awesome work!! I've already made a promise to myself to do a drawing for one of your chapters. I'll give you an update once it's finished! (please remind me as well - so, as to boost the art speed. Haaha)

NO! i ran out of chapters and this things not complete yet! did you get writers block or something? i know the feeling, the first story i wrote intending tobe longer than two pages took me eight years to finish so just finish this ok or i'm getting my note pad out on you and finishing this my self! oh who am i kidding i have no idea how i could finish this! but i will send you a pm with an idea of what i'd like to see happen next maybe it'll trigger a brainstorm, or not i'm gonna anyway kay bye.

squall/tidus anyway cardel you were the one rubbing your hands together with the thought of torturing riku whats up did you suddenly feel guilty about that anyway still love this story every moment of it

heck yeah i'm confused as hell!-pause-shrug-whatever! on with the story

yay riku laughed and was still smiling at the end of this chapter i thought you were gonna bring him back down towards the end but yay you didnt. on to the next chapter which will probably be extra dramatic to make up for a chapter full of fluff.

ha ha dont listen to em the more angst and drama the better i say so long as no-one dies its all good in my book all i ask for is a happy ending

omfg i just love you! so so so good!

oh oh oh! this story is so cool!

KYA! that's was amazing! and it's only the first chapter

I'm going to review now, then read chapter 10 when I get back up. -rechecks update date- GET TO UPDATING! I'm drawn into this story. It hasn't really been that confusing, except with the lack of sleep for half a week, I had to reread some sentences. Anyway, I'm hooked, and I really, really, REALLY want to see more of this story. ({-+PLEASE!+-}) I'll give you a huge batch of cookies if you update real soon. Now, for my nap, then this chapter. o.o;

this's one of the best psychologica stuff with Kh characters i've ever read. you made it fit nicely that what had happened in KH was a dream. now i'm really curious why can't Sora remember. and the part where Riku listened to the tape and realized the odds of him kneeling on the sideway while 1st chapter it was another person, that part was the most impressive. i also like how you describe Riku's thought about Sora, "his sora this" "his sora that" i love it.

i hope you continue this and go till the end. this is some kind of story that i've been waiting for.

You have(in my opinion) one of the best original KH stories out there. Please Please Please update! I don't know if I'll be able to stand not getting an update for this story any longer!

Cool story, ive just found it and had to say that it is beautifully well written. Its such a shame that you haven't updated for ages, i would really love to read the rest of it.