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| Colonel Marksman 2005-07-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou have very good writing skills (being a novelist myself). How can I tell? Think about the plot. Lain is curious about growing up, sneaks into her sister's room, trys on make-up for whatever reason. You made this scenario sound very interesting and meaningful. Only true writing talent can do that. If this scenario actually happened on the series, its probably the way it woud actually go. Very good job. Way to go. But, there is that one "however", or "but". Although you portrayed the charaters correctly according to the series, you might be a little mistaken about the truth behind Lain's behavior and way she dresses. E-mail me if you have any questions. |
| Miho 2005-04-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseDear person who wrote this, What I wanted to say is... THIS FANFICTION ROCKED!~ Miho |
| A friend 2004-12-18 ch 1, anon. | abusePerfectionato. |
| Kenshin Urameshi 2004-09-25 ch 1,  | abuseI like this story, its good, and Serial Experiments Lain is a weird series, but i likt it too. Keep on writing! ^_^ |
| me 2004-07-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was very nice. You really caught each character's personality. Well done... |
| Akuma-sama 2004-07-11 ch 1, | abuseOh, I like ^_^ Reika was well pictured... actually, pretty much *every* character was on the spot. I'm looking forward to more Lain fics from you...? Well, Good luck in whatever you decide to do ^_- |