THe repettitive nature of this poem added a good struckture, but it seemed to have no end.

Hey! I really enjoyed this...It was so perfect for the torment Emeraude was going through, the thoughts that were zooming through her mind. You really conveyed it all well. It would be really cool to see a sister-poem to this, like from Zagato's point of view...what he was thinking, feeling...maybe even the poor Magic Knights...Anyway, kudos on a lovely poem!