Yo pretty good pretty god! yeah rip that shit baby You are a future writer as I will be a future player for the Seattle Sonics. We chose different lives bro but I'll still read this!

Yo pretty good pretty god! yeah rip that shit baby You are a future writer as I will be a future player for the Seattle Sonics. We chose different lives bro but I'll still read this!

LOUDER! i NEED TO TP 4 MY BUNGHOLE! !

I guess it was okay aside from Claire fighting leon in the parking lot. don't do that again.Ever ever ever! That's wrong leon's a player like me!

as if I aint pissed enough at women but now u gotta have claire smackin on leon? u really suck! fuck you! u made me hate claire 2! girls would go to jail for hitting us! I'd rip that bitch apart!

as much as I like claire if she touched me like that I would kill her!

I like the way that Ryan is very slowly becoming the focus of the series - good foreshadowing of later story arcs. Great wrap-up ending here, with the right amount of surprises. Kind of feels like a video game in that way. :)

My favorite chapter, by far - the romance scene is done with a lot of honesty (a trait that Leon's been lacking recently) and clarity.

The nightmare scene has always been one of my favorites - I don't know why. Leon arguing with his subconscious (how do you do that, anyway?) is a lot of fun to read, even if it's a little bit creepy. Good!

The intrigue never ends. I never quite pictured Leon being able to shoot someone in cold blood...until this story, that is. Umbrella has done quite a number on him. We'll see how that turns out for the rest of our heroes...

Argh. Cliffhangers! I can't wait to (re)read the licker scene! Now how are they going to get out of this mess?

Vincent, Vincent, Vincent. Just what is it that you're planning?

Oh, that meeting scene between Claire and Leon is simply great! Miss Redfield's a little too hot under the collar, isn't she? Terrific way to bring these two back together!

I'd forgotten about the flashbacks in this story. They're a little weird, after reading your writing style now. I do like Leon's recap, though.

hey! just finished the story. really really kewl! keep it up! btw, we have the same b-day (!), which is actually coming up in like five weeks or something...well, bye for now!