great chapter update soon :)

*clap clap* i like already keep up the good work deary...oh HP 6 is comin out soon woot woot and POTC 2&3 r coming 2006 baby oh yea..wel loves gotta fly toodles

hey...i like it so far u could go somewhere with this story in all honesty...what are the requirements for a Beta-reader...btw thanks for reviewing my story..unfortunatly ff.net took it off..again..which i truly dont see y?..well hope u keep going w/ this story..and i wouldnt mind being ur beta..i just need to no what is required.. :D by!

I'm interested...though I think Elizabeth deserves a smack...

"elizabeth, I'm leaving," Will looked down Shamefully. "Forever..."

and so she asks if he's coming back?!?!?! *beats her with a stick.* Obviously if he says hes leaving forever, it means hes GOING AWAY...FOR ETERNITY! *falls over*

Other than that, really cute, and I can't wait to see what happens to Will, and how he'll find Jack. :)

_reg_

Im not a beta reader but hey it was awsome mate write more would you?