I WAS WRONG! I WAS WRONG! I WAS WRONG! NONE OF THAT WAS TRUE! YOU WERE RIGHT! I told you I wasn't sure, my sister told me. so she was wrong. I WAS STILL WRONG THOUGH!

Poor Kyo, everyone is torturing him. I liked this though.

That's so sad, but I loved it at the same time! Not that you did a bad job, but I think I know how Kyoko really died. I'm going to tell you wheather you like it or not! Okay, Kyo was going to see Akito, Yuki beat Kyo 'till he coudn't move by Akito's orders. Akito ended up rapping Kyo, Kyo got away, and ran across the street. Kypko was driving and swerved so she wouldn't hit him. Then she hit someting, I don't know. My sister told me so i'm not quite sure. YES,I FINALLY GOT TO TELL SOMEBODY! Oh yeah, Akito is a girl, so she ended up using a "tool" on Kyo.

I like this idea so if you don't mine can I use it for my story the Cat's past I'm writing? You don't have to but I've been having trouble about how I could get Kyoko to die and make it seem like Kyo's fault. This is really good and I like your other stories to. Ryply back and give me your answer in a review of my story the Cat's Past.

cute

(;_;)

Lurel

I really like this

nice cliffhangers...cant u update "Of Hidden Truths"?

so sad...yet so good! I love it! great job!

[zefni]

true, angsty kyo is really adorale... And your portray it very well.

great job

This chapter was really good!Your theory on Kyo's involement with Kyoko'ds death is so believable that I wouldn't be surprised if that's what really happened!I wish Takaya-sensei would hurry up and tell us!I agre with you this story should be a one-shot until Takaya-sensei gives us more events about Kyoko's death to theorize about!-