hey i realy like this story.mind me for asking when will you add the next chapter? i would like to know what will happen next.

wow..i feel sorry for the kid...i noticed that you havent updated in a while and was wondering if you could post another chapter or something...because this is a really good so far and it has captured my attention

CONTINUE THIS!
I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN IF YOU DON'T!
(i don't mean that but update!)

I take it Naru divorces and leaves Keitaro for giving her an 'imperfect' child, and Motoko catches him on the rebound. Or she just couldn't handle her child's special needs.

what ever happened to the "update soon"?
aside from that, i can look past the "poor" punctuation, grammar and spelling by assuming that because you are Brazilian, english isn't your first language

when's chapters two and on coming out?

I love your writing style. It's an interesting premise Naru and Kei's daughter albino and the Hina-Family dealing with it. Hope to read more soon :)

where is chapter 2

why does motoko end up married to him after his daughters birth

don't stop!!

Hey, I remember reviewing this fic before saying I liked it and to please continue...You said Chapter 2 coming soon. That was a little less than 5 months ago. What exactly is your definition of soon? :p Update, kiddo.

hey, I loved the first chapter of "A Red Eyed Angel" I hope that you plan to update...

Hey, man, it's a nice story, but the delay is too inconvenient... Don't make so long intervals between the chapters. Continue the great job fellow!

Thst's right I already wrote a review but this isn't a review this is me asking what the hell is going on with you and this fic, it's been over a month and you still haven't updated, what's up, are you still working on it or have you given up on it. Anyways if you would be so kind as to e-mail me at the address above with a response I'd really appreciate it. Peace w/ chicken grease!

The stories good, no doubt about that. But it was kinda hard to read because of most of the sentences had improper grammer. Keep up the good work, if you can try and fix the grammer.

good story, remember to give credits to who rightfully deserves it.(Ken Akamatsu) lil short, some grammar errors, but I like the story since its based around my fav character in LH (Motoko) n well...Keitaro. Keep it up!