once again- read this a while ago, but neglected to review o.

I really liked your poem Luna, you should write more sometime. (hinthint soon). Love your fanfics.

Tipix

Hey! you're really really really really (well you get my point) good at writing poetry! i can appreciate it alot because i find it very hard! anyways awesome poem! please keep writing!

Hey I love ur peom and ur chapters my fave is muggle studies. it really does sound like J.K. Rowling wrote it. I think we all love Sirius but I think he may come back or play so greater part in the later books. TTFN

I love poetry - not the best poet, but I love it. And I love to read/write things about Sirius. So, you can imagine, this was just a bonus. I like it. A lot.

-Paddy

P.S. At this point, I'd be going crazy had I written this in Word. So...many...fragments!

wow that was unique. I gotta say I cud have imagined me sittin playin the bongos to that in some smoky cafe, lol. No offense! ACK! Btw, youre not annoying ;). Anyways, the poem was really good and u tried to keep it in text. Keep on truckin!(p.s. watch trailer park boys on thursdays at 9 on showcase.)

I Need more Corruptees

Nicely written. I think you should keep on writing. You are a very gifted writer.

Aww...D@mn Wormtail...it's all his effing fault! &$$@*%)_)(*&&*%#$@&*$%$... -Cough- Yeah, anyhow...great poem...it's so sad that Padfoot's gone...But JKR wrote it so well! I wouldn't change it for the world...but now instead of wanting to just kill off that stupid rat, I want to kill off Remus too...which is depressing cuz he's my favorite! Cuz one marauder all alone is just wrong. It was never meant to be that way. So, instead of Remus and Sirius being there in the end, Moony and Padfoot without Prongs and the traitor, I think Remus should die a heroic Marauder's death...-sobs in corner-

Yah, well, that's just my twisted opinion, lol.

Great poem! Din't forget to update your other fics!

VERY GOOD! sorry i'm kinda hyper right now. but it is really really good! its kind of sad to :( he's my favourite mauraurder... i think i spelt that right.. anyway its good! bye!

*tear* I love my Sirius! ANd I love this poem!

Padfoot

I thought this was really sweet. It's definitely something i wouldn't have thought about doing and think the way you did it was brilliant. I love the way you described the sky! Well done!

yep, brilliant! What a wonderful poem. You discribe Sirius' feelings so well, anger with the fire.. the black sky with a mysterious dark almost sad feeling. Amazing, nothing short of what I'd expect from you. Just..WOW. Go luna! You definatly would make Sirius proud! review you l8er -Siri