great story keep up the good work

ooooh, that was good and unexpected. gotta write s'more!

What a nifty little story. I'm not really sure about her losing to Kodachi, but then again Kodachi usually doesn't play fair. I dunno if you can really get away with Ranma being surprised that she yielded. It seems to me that this was a setup from the begining on his part. Now if she'd had more training and she called him out, well that _might_ be a surprise. Even so, I'm looking forward to additional chapters. That's for a fun read.

OHHH-MORE PLEASE-THIS IS TOO CUTE!-PLEASE HURRY UP AND UPDATE.

Female Ranma was "like a man possessed," hm? How appropriate. ...No spelling errors except "traing" for "training," "soar" for "sore," and "there" for "their." Grammar and other mechanics could use some work, though. So next time proof before posting. The content is good fun, and it's a relatively original field. However, the treatmento could have been a lot better-the fight scene, especially, read like the script of a cheesy kung-fu flick from the early 80s. Gotta like the WAFF tho'.

Cool! I like it!

I like the general idea behind this story; that of Ranma teaching Akane. I did have a few problems with it, however. First, Ranma and Akane are both acting a bit too mature. This is probably the biggest problem. I just can't accept these characters as Ranma and Akane. Nabiki was pretty good, though. And second, I doubt Akane would loose badly to Kodachi, but that's a minor quibble, and a key plot point, so I can live with it. I did like the bit at the end, with Akane telling Ranma he had to take her on a date. Rather sneaky, that. I look forward to more.

Oh, this is so good! I really liked this idea and the ending was very good. Please, do continue and fast! :) Me likes it.

That was fun. A much different training method than the norm but excellent nonetheless. Just love that trick at the end. It should be much more training for her. Hehe. :)

This is a really good plot! So exciting and I really can't wait for the next chapter, even if it wasn't preread it wass really good!I can't wait for your next chapter. Keep up the good work!

Nice little twist at the end. Good job.

This was really,really weird..and I loved it!

writewritewrite!

WOW I can't wait! That was really sneaky! _ Got to love it! Write more real soon

I like it, a explanation for her motivations that doesn't make her look like a rabid bull.. and she CAN learn! That was right up there with Nibiki, at the end.. WRITE MORE! :)