 mousecat 2009-11-22 . chapter 67Actually, this is a great filler! The earthquake explanation is very believable. The news coverage was a nice effect. Finding out what happened to Tohru and the other friends was definitely needed. Tohru's feelings about the rat and cat must be a jumbled mess. Will she stay away from Yuki, like she promised Akito? Poor Hatori, really had his work cut out for him! He must be exhausted! Kureno's trying to keep things together, and Rin seems to be trying to destroy Akito and Yuki. And what about Akito, Yuki and Kyo? What happens now? Great chapter! |
 Freakishly Awesome 2009-11-22 . chapter 67Eh, a filler. Is there something wrong with Rin? She may want to get rid of Akito but there is no way that Seto would be better. Hoping for the next chapter! |
 KuroitsukiNoMai 2009-11-22 . chapter 67oh no! those stupid council peoples... now yuki's gonna go and beat them up~ haha ^.^ jk jk
great great great chapter! thank you so much!
*~tsukiko~* |
 PenguinGirl 2009-11-22 . chapter 67AH! I want to know what's going to happen next. Tohru can't truly be banned from seeing Yuki pho-evah--can she? And Yuki...I'm going to go and read back that whole saga. I mean it was like he was possessed! Anyshways. Can't wait for next update--this chapter didn't resolve the cliffie from ch. 65, just continued it!
-penguin girl |
 ZionTwilight 2009-11-09 . chapter 1Just Amazing! |
 AkitoIsMe 2009-10-08 . chapter 66 I had written my previous review before I read this chapter because I didn't have the time to read it. But now that I have...well...it feels like my mind has been shattered and then put back together in a different way. I literally heard background music in my head as I was reading. I actually cried for a few seconds before I regained control. I just can't really think of what to say...I read the chapter a while ago...11:00 pm and it's now 6:00 am and my mind's still reeling! All I can say is beautiful...captivating story you have written here. And you definately need more reviews. |
 AkitoIsMe 2009-10-03 . chapter 66 Wow O.o
this has got to be the best Furuba story since...well, since the original Fruits Basket. Seriously. I applaud you! :) |
 Freakishly Awesome 2009-09-25 . chapter 66WOW. This is seriously one of the most awesomest (Sorry, couldn't come up with a good word), and longest fic I've read. I mean, you at over 500,0 words and you're not even done yet!? It's obviously take a long time. I love how you write all of them! Yuki definitely went off the deep end, really, really deep end. I still love him. Poor Kyo. Poor everyone, actually. Tohru swearing never to see Yuki again. I have to wonder if it'll last. Hope to see the next chapter soon! |
 bondsareforever 2009-09-13 . chapter 6I've read some other fanfiction focused on yuki and akito, but there was always something that was slightly off. whenever i read them, i couldn't help but realize that most of the authors tended to favor the more abusive side of akito and yuki's relationship, but when i read your take on their reationship, i was happy. happy that someone had realized that their relationship wasnt all about being sad, and lonely. though, when i realized that, i was also a little sad. sad that all people seemed recognized was akito's ability to harm people and that made me all the more happy when reading you fanfic because you did realize that their bond was more than that. people will always recognize the bad aspects of a relationship, but will never stop to think that there might be something good beneath all the bad they see.
im not saying that i am above judging people. what i am saying is thank you, thank you, thank you, for sharing your outlook on the good-as well as the bad- aspects of a reationship.
this is honestly the best fan-based writing tht i have ever read. dont ever let other people discourage your views on anything in life. i hope to read more of your wonderful works of art.
sincerely,
bondsareforever |
 Dark Inu Fan 2009-09-03 . chapter 66Ugh, I nearly feel sick after reading this. Not because of your writing, but what happened. I bet that if Tohru felt like it, she could disappear and they wouldn't notice for quite a while. Let alone, I doubt Hatori would even notice a small split lip. I still can't believe what happened between those two though. At least Tohru will now be able to realize that not everything ends with 'and they lived happily ever after'. Keep up the good work, dark |
 FluffyBiscuits 2009-09-03 . chapter 66Yikes.Yuki is quicker to unleashing fury than Kyo sometimes. I wonder how Yuki will feel about Akito telling Tohru to stay away from him. Well, he might just be happy Akito is alive. |
 jiaqianyin 2009-09-03 . chapter 66I'm SO impressed! It took me a long time readingit to finally understand, but the complexity of this story is what I like the most! You know what. Now, I'm absolutely certain that if you made this into a book, it would be such a HUGE HIT! This would probably be as long as the seventh book of Harry Potter, and as popular as Twilight Saga is right now.
It took that long?! I can't even express how amazed and thankful I am! It's almost as if you're a real writer. Now that I think about it, you probably are. Could you tell me what book's you've written? Although I guess that would give me you're name, and it's not so smart to do that. All assuming you've actually written a book of course.
I AM DEFINITELY LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER! |
 Oblivious-Goddess 2009-09-03 . chapter 66Wow very intense! I have been waiting for this chapter for a while and it was amazing. Its about time Yuki freaked out on Kyo. I cannot wait for the next one and you did an amazing job well worth the wait! |
 mousecat 2009-09-02 . chapter 66Wow! I never knew Yuki could keep everything locked up inside him for so long, that when Kyo hurt and left Akito for dead, he finally exploded.
I have no words to describe the fight between the nezumi and neko. I was too shocked to stop reading for even an instant!
Yuki answers to only one Guardian, and I am glad Kyo failed in his intent to kill her.(last chapt.). I love the bond between Akito and Yuki, and remember fondly how the rat(in the early chapts.) was confused by her worrying and concern for his well being.
Hatori certainly has his work cut out for him.
Will Tohru live up to her promise to Akito?
What will Kyo and the other juunishi do now? God, I love this story! |
 KuroitsukiNoMai 2009-09-02 . chapter 66that was incredible... epic, amazing, enthralling, entrancing, PERFECT! i loved it! thank you SO SO much! but now everything really is in shambles... *cry*
but an AMAZING chapter! words cannot express my joy! haha ^.^ thanks so much! thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou!!
*~tsukiko~* |