I just reread your story again and I am definately amazed at how you keep Tohma and Mika so IC in their interactions, especially during the scene where they discuss children..or the lackthereof. But what amazed me the most was Yuki's breakdown for his sister. That was probably the only way he would ever express concern for her.

There aren't enough Tohma and Mika fanfics around, thank you so much for writing one! I really hope that you'll continue with this story, and I completely agree with your profile.

ohmygod. you SHOULD update soon and not abandon this fic. that would be just cruelty! CRUELTY!

sigh. overdramatic i know. basically, this is such a GREAT fic and i really, really want to know what happens next. PLEASE? (with cherry on top) :D

--> i hope i don't offend you or anything. hehehe

What a wonderful and intriguing story!! I really hope that you continue it, because I am really interested in where this is going. Everyone is completely in-character and you are doing a wonderful job with it. Please post more when you have time!

aw please write more i love it!

Ah! What does he see?!? This is a great story! Update soon! It really makes it feel like part of the series you got them dead on.

V FLAME V

Wow. It's nice to see this fic finally get updated. I remember reading it a year or so before and I found it really intriguing. I like the characterization and the flow of your story.

I hope you keep updating. Keep up the good work.

mika did something stupid, serves tohma...

still no signs of hiro and ayakja the way u pu it in the summary...

when are you updating??!! *_*

Wow! So Mika finally left Toma? Oh, you've got to update now because this is getting way to intresting to stop! Till you next chapter, Asta!

Once again, so real and canon it hurts. Four stars for in-characterness with plot development and everything and gah (just hugs.)

Who's being mean to you on livejournal? Gravitation lj people unite: screw them.

ph come on!! how can you leave us on such a cliffie! hurry up and write more

Oh my goodness!! This must be the best TohmaMika story I ever read so far..

Please update as soon as you can. I just can't stand with te cliffie..

Please!

"And if one more person asked him what Nittle Grasper meant…"

"My work is my legacy."

...This is so in character that it pains me with these unfortunate circumstances. Four definite gold stars for you.

so totally terribly sad

and i loved it

i would divorce in good terms if i had to live like that :S why do they have sex even!?

great story ^_^

Don´t take a whole year to repost! :p

I'm glad you decided to come back to this story. I was thrilled to receive an author alert for it. I enjoyed this chapter very much and I look forward to seeing more-- no matter how long it takes you. ;]

I like the hints of where the story is headed and the comparisions between couples. I thought your seques were very smoothly written, too. Good luck!