Ooh yeah! Who's this Valandra chick, eh? I want to know! Tell me tell me, please! Hm... ok, Justin seems a little too hotheaded for my taste. Can I have Bobby? *sly grin* Love that chanpter, and I can't wait to find out what happens next!
-Krisian-
sister 9/30/04 . chapter 6
OK I seem to be having trouble registersing but I just want to say I love this story, and any one who says it's bad are just poop-heads. that dumby doesn't know what he's talking about hint lxg fan, well I still love the beautiful Aquial, but I want more Penny yes I will see you when you get home for dinner.
LXG FAN 9/26/04 . chapter 6
Ok I would like to tell you that that sucked big time! I mean we come to this section to read about THE LEAGUE OF EXTRAORDINARY GENTLEMEN, not your stupid, misfits, that are so one demesional it's painful! Your plot is so idiotic that I don't want to read any more because I'm afraid it can just get worse. Finally to top this off you can't spel and have you ever heard of a litle concept called grammer! This is the worst peice of trash i have ever read!
*strikes corny superhero pose* Here I am to save the DAY! And beta, and whatnot. I decided it would be good for me to actually READ this chapter before I tried answering the question you asked! Hehehe! Ah, now I can put faces to names! Nice. I didn't think it was dumb at all - rather helpful, actually. Ooh. Yellow eyes! Yup, I deffinately like Aquail. And the brothers. Maybe it's just me, but they sound rather nice-looking, in thier own respective ways. [I'm a little boy-crazy... hehehe!] I await your next chappie with much anticipation!
Ok, I still like Aquail... and I'm beginning to like the brothers... I think... Anyway, the seven cats were kind of amusing! Smart animals, those. [Treasure this bit of the review, cause I am SO not a cat person.] Maco... Maco... what's a Maco? *looks back at chapter one* Oh! THAT'S a Maco! Cool chapter, dahling. Let's get the gang together and have an adventure, eh? Happy writing!
I'm glad the kitties are enjoying the mouse. Great chapter, though your spelling and punctuation usage is a little off. MORE, NOW! You need to write more!
I still like Raven, so there! and I still think you rock. Besides, I'm still a town. *dances about in happy circles singing, "I'm a town, I'm a town...* (I don't think thats normal)
Hmm, your Ben sounds exactly like my brother...whose name is Ben...go figure. Anyway, my bro'loves to work on electronics and he could come from another world... Umm, What is a tach-void?
For you, a rubber mouse. Why? "cause he has purple eyes.
NO! A CLIFFIE! *freaks out and runs around* AAH! *smacks into a wall* Ow... Ok, got a little excited there, didn't I? Any-whoodle, things are coming together! Ooh, musical moment: *breaks out into Third Day's "Come Together" and dances around* Hehehe! I'm WAY too awake for 8:00 in the morning AND being at school! [Ugh... school.] I like it, I like it! Update! Update! [I'm repeating myself... I'm repeating myself...] Hehehe! Good job and keep it up!
Aww, your so sweet! I'm a town! Woohoo! that's one less character to worry about! Hehe! Anyway, I like Raven, though I tend to like dark, angry, mysterious people anyway.
Well, I'm hungry, so I'm gonna go now and await chapter 4.
Lilrin is a town? That cracks me up! Hey, yay! I'm a guard! Beware my telekinesis! GRR! Ooh, the pices are falling into place! I don't know why, but the HQ place seems to be a cross between the Xavier Institute and the OSS headquaters from the Spy Kids movies. [I so love the Spy Kids, even though I'm 17!] Anyway, those people were total jerks to Raven! GRR to them! GRR I say! DUDE! Skinner gets his own pub! That so rocks! Well, I suppose it makes sense, seeing as the League are uber-famous in this time. Any-who, I'm glad you updadated! I'll give you a Slinky if you update soon!