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Naitriab 11/5/04 . chapter 7
Hey. This is certainly different to any future LXG story that I have read before. None of them seem to be like that - mine included.

I like your characters as they seem to be fairly realistic, the idea of the Skinner Bar was one the appealed to me as it definately seemed to fit.

Any way conrgrats and update soon.
Krisian Rose 10/20/04 . chapter 7
Ooh yeah! Who's this Valandra chick, eh? I want to know! Tell me tell me, please! Hm... ok, Justin seems a little too hotheaded for my taste. Can I have Bobby? *sly grin* Love that chanpter, and I can't wait to find out what happens next!

-Krisian-
sister 9/30/04 . chapter 6
OK I seem to be having trouble registersing but I just want to say I love this story, and any one who says it's bad are just poop-heads. that dumby doesn't know what he's talking about hint lxg fan, well I still love the beautiful Aquial, but I want more Penny yes I will see you when you get home for dinner.
LXG FAN 9/26/04 . chapter 6
Ok I would like to tell you that that sucked big time! I mean we come to this section to read about THE LEAGUE OF EXTRAORDINARY GENTLEMEN, not your stupid, misfits, that are so one demesional it's painful! Your plot is so idiotic that I don't want to read any more because I'm afraid it can just get worse. Finally to top this off you can't spel and have you ever heard of a litle concept called grammer! This is the worst peice of trash i have ever read!
Lady Lilrin 9/22/04 . chapter 6
yay! Now you need to post chappie 6! Yay! You get a box of cookies!
Krisian Rose 9/21/04 . chapter 6
*strikes corny superhero pose* Here I am to save the DAY! And beta, and whatnot. I decided it would be good for me to actually READ this chapter before I tried answering the question you asked! Hehehe! Ah, now I can put faces to names! Nice. I didn't think it was dumb at all - rather helpful, actually. Ooh. Yellow eyes! Yup, I deffinately like Aquail. And the brothers. Maybe it's just me, but they sound rather nice-looking, in thier own respective ways. [I'm a little boy-crazy... hehehe!] I await your next chappie with much anticipation!

-Krisian-
Krisian Rose 9/15/04 . chapter 5
Ok, I still like Aquail... and I'm beginning to like the brothers... I think... Anyway, the seven cats were kind of amusing! Smart animals, those. [Treasure this bit of the review, cause I am SO not a cat person.] Maco... Maco... what's a Maco? *looks back at chapter one* Oh! THAT'S a Maco! Cool chapter, dahling. Let's get the gang together and have an adventure, eh? Happy writing!

-Krisian-

PS - Yay for school... [note the sarcasm.]
Lady Lilrin 9/11/04 . chapter 5
I'm glad the kitties are enjoying the mouse. Great chapter, though your spelling and punctuation usage is a little off. MORE, NOW! You need to write more!

Okay, I'm done...

Lily
cheatachu82 8/26/04 . chapter 4
Good story! Update soon:)
Lady Lilrin 8/23/04 . chapter 4
I still like Raven, so there! and I still think you rock. Besides, I'm still a town. *dances about in happy circles singing, "I'm a town, I'm a town...* (I don't think thats normal)

Hmm, your Ben sounds exactly like my brother...whose name is Ben...go figure. Anyway, my bro'loves to work on electronics and he could come from another world... Umm, What is a tach-void?

For you, a rubber mouse. Why? "cause he has purple eyes.

Lily
Krisian Rose 8/23/04 . chapter 4
NO! A CLIFFIE! *freaks out and runs around* AAH! *smacks into a wall* Ow... Ok, got a little excited there, didn't I? Any-whoodle, things are coming together! Ooh, musical moment: *breaks out into Third Day's "Come Together" and dances around* Hehehe! I'm WAY too awake for 8:00 in the morning AND being at school! [Ugh... school.] I like it, I like it! Update! Update! [I'm repeating myself... I'm repeating myself...] Hehehe! Good job and keep it up!

-Krisian-
Lady Lilrin 7/31/04 . chapter 3
Aww, your so sweet! I'm a town! Woohoo! that's one less character to worry about! Hehe! Anyway, I like Raven, though I tend to like dark, angry, mysterious people anyway.

Well, I'm hungry, so I'm gonna go now and await chapter 4.

Lady Lilrin
Krisian Rose 7/27/04 . chapter 3
Lilrin is a town? That cracks me up! Hey, yay! I'm a guard! Beware my telekinesis! GRR! Ooh, the pices are falling into place! I don't know why, but the HQ place seems to be a cross between the Xavier Institute and the OSS headquaters from the Spy Kids movies. [I so love the Spy Kids, even though I'm 17!] Anyway, those people were total jerks to Raven! GRR to them! GRR I say! DUDE! Skinner gets his own pub! That so rocks! Well, I suppose it makes sense, seeing as the League are uber-famous in this time. Any-who, I'm glad you updadated! I'll give you a Slinky if you update soon!

-Krisian-
Lady Lilrin 7/16/04 . chapter 2
WOWOWOW! That was so, so, i don't know what to say! I think you have great potential. Plaese o please write more!

lily
Lady Lilrin 7/16/04 . chapter 1
o, sounds fun! now, shall i read? yes! onto the main event!

Lily
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