that victory theme reall was dumb! but Ward got the last laugh, didn't he. lol that was hilarious.

anyways, about Laguna drinking...he doesn't usually drink alcohol. he only drinks juice. the only exception to this was when he was in Julia's room wanting to help her with her problem.

and also, Kiros is the one who can understand Ward, not Laguna (well, most of the time anyways .)

ciao

Queen

Everything is white btw.

Maybe it was your intention,

but its not a very good way to get readers.

hahah! a touch of ingenius! great humour and original plot :D! the gay bar and victory theme was hilarious! lol, only thing: get a better title, wellll.. you dont have to, but it's too long. good stuff!

LOL That was great! *claps* Great job!

Um... the text is white... I had to use select all to read it...

Is this suppose to be some kind of joke?

cOol, to see the words put ctrla , no cursing...GREAT!

I'd like to apologize for accidentally leaving this story in invisible ink. Please

highlight the text to read it. This will never happen again.

love, ADR

You need to change the font color on this page to a darker color as the white words don't show up on the white background. Other than that, not too bad. Good writing style, and stayed in character.

Nah, it's just whie. Click ctrl A.

I Hate to be the one to tell you this, but there's a blank page where your fic should be.