 DBZLOVER 2009-08-21 . chapter 26 very well written, excellent story |
 gemini6 2009-08-20 . chapter 13 Great fight scenes, wonderful story. |
 astronight34int. 2009-08-19 . chapter 4 Great idea for another android, keep up the good work! |
 marc 2009-08-19 . chapter 1 I've already read the story, and I love it. Keep up the good work! |
 twisterblake 2007-05-27 . chapter 8hey great chapter i hope that vegeta would be verto true father for ever and this story or the other sequel i hope and verto and vegeta have their own father and son bond like vegeta does with trunks same thing with verto love and pride. |
 writer-person-05 2006-12-31 . chapter 26Awesome story I can't wait to read the 4 saga! |
 writer-person-05 2006-12-29 . chapter 24Great chapters I can't wait to read more. |
 writer-person-05 2006-12-19 . chapter 22Good chapter I'm almost done with this saga I can't wait to read the next |
 writer-person-05 2006-11-27 . chapter 19ANother great chapter |
 writer-person-05 2006-11-20 . chapter 15Awesome chapter I gota read more you have me hooked! |
 writer-person-05 2006-10-29 . chapter 4Good chapter I was surprised |
 Blusher 2005-12-21 . chapter 26 plz don't tell me this is where it ends. |
 mremperor 2004-08-21 . chapter 26 This has to be one of my fav stories. If you never finish it I will have to make up an ending for myself. The story is well thought out and has plenty of plot twists. keep it up. Write number 4! |
 chaos-bardock 2004-08-06 . chapter 20yawn well im going to look on sc now im going to look tommaow to see how many reveiews i need |
 chaos-bardock 2004-08-06 . chapter 19heheheh umm ... what reiview is this heheh man i am bored |