From both:This stroy is really interesting.

Interesting...

IT'S TOO CONFUSING!LEARN TO WRITE IN PARAGRAPHS!

I know. It happens a lot. Brilliant writers sometimes have the same great ideas. But hey, don't criticize anyone for it.

i LIKE PART 1 BETTER YOU KNOW

gettin better. lalalalalala! i love romance! laaaaaaaaa! :::glass breaks::: urg. sry, i am HAPPY today! ! Anyway, good story. i don like to think of brock as a geek, though.

Y'know, why is this rated PG-13? It could easily be rated PG. Just thought I'd let you know. 'K. Um...bye. (By the way, does anyone know Jedinara? Okay, this time I'm leaving for real.)oh, and plz tell me if anyone knows Jedinara! Okay! I'm leaving! Jeez, some people...

I fail to see how your 'series' can be called a series when everything you say is vague and confusing.

Now it's really starting to pick up with a great story. Hope you finish it. But isn't six years old young to be in love?

That wasn't boring! It was different, but not boring at all! Can't wait for the next part! (o_o)

Cute and interesting.

Thanx Misty lover your a pal! _

i cant wait till part 3 i smell romance!