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-siMpLe-reActiON-
2009-11-20 . chapter 6
AWESOME!!please update XD!
this story really interest me. it's very cute how they treat each other and Ranma not knowing how to act as a husband seeking guidance to his dumb father XDD. that's so cute!especially her first kiss! this story is amazingly great.
:D I really love it! please update!! ^^
Pop Dragon
2008-04-24 . chapter 6
ok...this is intesnse! keep going! (is it just me...or is Akane a little naive?)
savannah
2008-02-20 . chapter 6
great story! cant wait to read the rest!
Uzziel
2004-10-08 . chapter 6
Great chapter. Ranma doesn't love akane?

WHY?

Please update soon
Airen2
2004-10-07 . chapter 6
Thanks so much for the update. Great chapter. I look forward to when Ranma actully realizes the treasure he has in his wife. How can the other guy marry her if she's already married? Anyway I'm going to sleep now. I hope to read another chapter when you get to it.
Piroko Ryuu
2004-10-07 . chapter 6
Wait! Unless what!! Please, I must know! Besides my anticipation to see what happens next, this is an awesome story. Please update soon, and I'll review again. Ja ne! ^_^
Sieg1308
2004-10-06 . chapter 6
this was great. please update soon.
Hououza
2004-10-06 . chapter 6
Excellent chapter, don't worry about the delay, especially now since you have exams! (Good luck with them by the way!)

Also I don't know how far away it is so HAppy Birthday! in advance, oddly enough my own approaches come November time...

Good luck & best wishes (extra of both for the exams!),

Hououza
Archmage of Necromancy
2004-09-17 . chapter 5
Well, that was interesting.
Lady Mokodane
2004-09-13 . chapter 5
aw, her first kiss. :D Ranma is such a recluse in this, maybe some introspect into him and why it was so necessary for them to get married.

Why didn't he ** more? Hm... ah well, so Genma wants eternal life. That damn panda.

Anywho, how did SH and UK become friends with Ranma in this one, the same as the last? I can't wait for the wedding night.

Ceya - Lady

PS - I WILL get back to choices... I think I may go work on it now! Thanks
Hououza
2004-09-13 . chapter 5
What?! No wedding night?

Seriously though that was a great chapter, nice to see Akane trying to keep her temper under control.

Interesting development with the jewel, the thing is why would they kidnap Akane and have her marry Ranma if that was all he was after...there must be more to it somehow...I look forwards to finding out.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
chidori-san
2004-09-10 . chapter 5
its so nice!! really! i love this story so much! please up-date soon!! ^^
Bunny Sailor Moon
2004-09-08 . chapter 5
I really like your story. I love the plot. Can't wait for the next update! thanks ^_^
Don't eat yellow snow
2004-09-08 . chapter 5
hey me again! i luved the ending of this chappie it was so...sweet. so please update when ya can im totally in2 this!
Prizz
2004-09-08 . chapter 5
It's good but a little complicated. It's hard to follow what's happening..take for example the moment Ranma took Akane to her room after he had saved her, all of a sudden the priest is announcing the final event of their wedding? And after the kiss, Ranma is polishing his boots... Though it is understandable, it is better if you put some space or border in between the scenes. ^_^ V,, Please Update soon!
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