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Hikikomori
2008-04-09 . chapter 3
I... I'm speechless.

It's like you wrote about me. I recognize so much in this fic... And... I want to thank you for so far, giving me a really beautiful read.
xXxDead.x.InsidexXx
2006-10-23 . chapter 3
Hey - Wow, this is a really good and interesting story so far; I love how you're manipulating Ryou,and bending the characters (theoretically speaking) to do your bidding. The idea of drugging Ryou was a great one. ^^;; Awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Fallon Dream
2006-03-25 . chapter 3
Aw... cuteness! *hugs author* Yay Ryou is going to be fine! update soon and you are doing a great job!
katie
2005-04-30 . chapter 3
omg i luv you story so far. its really good. well pleze hurry with the next chapter! sorry this is so short.
rachel jones
2004-09-12 . chapter 3
whats new pussycat?,
hey kitty! i'ts me! rachel from school. wassup? how do you like high school? rachel shaw gave me you site thingy here so i read your storys. this story was so sad...and good. but you know what would make it better? kurama *drool* hehehehehehhe just kiddin. write the next one. i wanna know what happens. oh! btw, i'm starting an account here. i'm shrinemaidendarkangel. check me out. call me too. 724-223-9509. love you...and kurama. bye
D.H. Knightly
2004-09-02 . chapter 3
His eating disorder really isn't an eating disorder... Skipping one meal and throwing up a few times does not count as an eating disorder.
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However, I do like this story. It's very... interesting. I always loved menage a tois, or however the french spell a lovely three person relationship. It always floated my boat more than a two person one. More exciting and more variety, expecually when it came to fanfictions.
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Bakura is a bastard, as is Kaiba, but Malik and Marik are so cute, do continue, please?
artemislee
2004-08-26 . chapter 3
By the looks of the next chapter title it seems like Bakura is going Ryou hunting... Or is it Kaiba? I really feel sorry for Ryou he has such a tough time with life. Luckly Malik and in here Marik are there to help him through life. I agree with you on Marik's speech whole heartedly. Yami helped him with that somehow.
Thief of Spades
2004-08-20 . chapter 3
Aww so sweet! Cute little Ryou! So far no eating disorder, but it looks good! Please update soon!
Dark Magician Girl Hikaru
2004-08-16 . chapter 3
Hmm, this is interesting. Very interesting. Poor Ryou. Hopefully this will end alright. Ud soon please. Till next time. ^_~
lolly-moon
2004-08-16 . chapter 3
MORE! WHOOT
IMPROVED Uber Rei Model 06
2004-08-15 . chapter 3
YOU UPDATED! Ryou-kun is so kawaii! ^_^ YEAH! MARIK/RYOU/MALIK /FOREVER/!
Lyrical Rex
2004-08-15 . chapter 3
Great chapter! And Marik is nice, which is cool. :D
Swii
2004-08-15 . chapter 3
OMG! I love this! Usually ppl do one main pairing but having multiple pairings is definately more realistic. Interesting plot and I can't wait for you to update! Hmm...eating disorder...interesting. *evil grin* UPDATE!
SmoeB1
2004-08-15 . chapter 3
AH!You cannot do that to me! It stopped! Just like that! Now I'll have to wait for another chapter!AH!
Lol, next chapter soon please!^_^
Obscured Illusions
2004-08-06 . chapter 2
Omg.. i can't wait until your next update! Great story so far.

~KATE
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