NO ONE can make their first jump. It just can't happen. Not even Neo could, and he's the One.
You can't do it. Wrong wrong wrong wrong.

I can not tell people this enough! Detail! Describe their emotions and confusion. Describe more of their backround. Describe their thoughts more. Otherwise okay. And I'm sensing that Tank and Neo are both diggin' Mystique, which by the way, isn't that a character in X-Men? The thought of Mystique making the first jump seems very illogical. She was simply too confused and thinking too much to be able to do it. E-mail me so that we can establish a correspondence, we could share ideas. Excepting all of the above it was okay.

Yay! You put it up! Fan-bloody-tastic! You're great! (Thanx for the sneak peak!)

Its really good. You should keep going with it. A

That was good, not perfect but nothing is, it was vary good. I enjoyed reading it and hope more will fallow.

This fic is awesome, it's really matrixy without being repetitive! I give it a 10 out of 10 and I think all Matrix fans should read it!