Beautiful. Their relationship develops so naturally and realistically and the structure of the piece is so nicely done. Thanks muchly for this fantastic read!

~EL

Oh dear this was so sweet and nice. Made my tummy all fluttery and warm. *hugs* Lovely read!

That was so sweet! Nicely done

that was bloody brilliant! it really captured a feeling and made me wonder and think. it was sweet as a rare wine.

It wasn't just sweet... it was so sublime & beautiful. (*wipes eyes*)

Especially the last two lines:

[["Can you not guess?"]]

[[The Vatican became Heaven when he recognized the look in Carl's eyes as love.]]

For one not to be moved by that, one would have to be a stone gargoyle or such. ;P

Keep up the great work! =D

Aw!


And it was good.

That was really sweet!! Loved how you put in the idea of VH's souvenirs for Carl-it shows the love.

Any more?
We must have more Carl/Van slash