aww! that was nice :)

i love jenny and amsterdams relatiuonship and i thought this was very good :) please do more...

Good stuff - definatly captured his character...

Great charactirization, short, but a bit compelling and alrogether, a great read, even if it took a little less than a minute to do so.

Kudos.

great! its really good. i wish you'd write a full story...cuz if ya havent noticed, theres not alot uv JennyAmsterdam ...so that would be great

-sonya

Finally, something new in the genre. Inspired huh? Great! Interesting comment on the nature of Amsterdam's plight.