oh that was lovely! made me almost cry! lovely lovely lovely! *adds to favs*

I LOVED it!

Heaven and Earth

Hey! Great poem, i liked it a lot! Keep up the good work! Could u check out my new story called "Come away with me"? it would really mean a lot.

xox

Eva

I love this poem. You should enter it in the Freelance site FreelancePoetry/_ click on poems. There is a contest. Check it out.

rolletti

That was so sad. :-(

It was very good though, I really liked it.

LOL (lot's of Love)

It was really beautiful. I usually don't read poems but this one caught my eye and I love it. It's got great anologies. (i don't think i spelled that right) anyway really good.

very good! sad but very well written. have a good day

aww! that's soo beautiful! i love the way u described everything it sounded so romantic!

So sad, so sweet. Are you Peter Pan himself

This is VERY good. I will be honest - when I see poems while I'm going through the list of stories, I say, "Psh. It's just a stupid poem. It can't be anything good." But that is obviously not true. This is very good. You have a talent. Use it well. *wink*