brilliant. I feel inspired.

What?! And I was looking forward to a romantic reunion! Ah well, kidnapped is better than what I'm doing to them at the moment xD. I
guess it's on to part three!

Need to use spell/grammar check. Also capatilize Senshi.
I guessed that Pallas would be the one to get the new computer just because she had blue hair. lol Interesting that the one that acts the most child like would get that.

Senshi is one of thoes words that is spelled the same way whether it is used a singular or plural.
I always like stories about Crystal Tokyo since much was never said about it offically.

Oh... I'm going straight onto the next one XD can't wait to read more.

Another awesome story! I love the way you wrote the Quartet.

I can't wait for the Blue Rose!

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The ending was hilarious!

Nice job with incoperating the school into Crystal Tokyo. I like it!

Nice development

Very good start

"History repeating it's self". Such a huge backdrop is created. I know this will tune out to be amazing! Great work Mangakachan!

Nice CLAMP tribute there, proof of your amazing writting talents. Building a big story arc, I can't wait to see this one unwind.

A phantom thief? In the Sailor Moon universe it's original. Good job.