I think I'm actually crying. It's so beautiful. I love the part you put about his mother. Good job. Bai-Bai!

lovely poem i almost cried, lol (seriously though) good job

*sniff*...that is the most sweetest poem that I have ever read...

I LOVE IT!

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

I love this poem, it's so sad and pretty... and captures the very essence of that scene... right before Vyers barges in, hehe. Lovely writing, great job! :)

Not bad... everything seemed to fit pretty well, namely the rhyming along with the Laharl's story. I especially liked the last stanza. Very sentimental. Just thought you would like to know that there's a Disgaea section up now, so you don't have to post under Misc. RPGs anymore. ^_^ Make sure to spread the word. Don't forget to either move or add this poem there as well! Hope to see some more fics soon!

Aw...I got both the good and the normal ending...great poem. I'd say it fits perfectly with the normal ending.

*sniff* it's so pretty and sad. *crys big waterfall*