Wow. I can actually see Sacher thinking that way...I like him better in the manga because he seems much more human. The last two lines...they totally make this fic.

wow, this wonderfully written. zaha torte has to be one of my favorite anime villains, and I believe you captured his perspective perfectly. great job!

You never told me that you were working on an SH one-shot! *evil glare* You're just lucky you're on my favorite authors list, unless I wouldn't have found out about this one.
I never really imagined Eclair as his puppet, until now. I pictured it as she loved him but it almost sounds like Kira from Mars, but not as whinny.
Either way I think you need to write this from Eclairs view. I know you see it in the manga but you never see what the girl is thinking inside, her inner turmoil.
Now I really want to reread SH. *sigh*