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lil joker
2008-10-14 . chapter 4
oh my what a cliff hanger i love it please update ^-^
Julesie
2007-11-29 . chapter 4
Another great fic and its really cute too, hope you update this soon ^_^

I loved this part in your fic

“This isn’t too fast is it?” Goku asked, staring down at him, “I don’t want it to be too fast for you.”

“Kakarrot, you’re not even in, how am I suppose to know if it’s fast or not?‘

*laughs*
fuu09
2007-06-20 . chapter 1
vegeta seem sweet~ *grins*
Dragon
2007-02-21 . chapter 4
Grate chapter! It would be grate if Vegeta found out he was pregnant and he was not shore how the father was Goku or Raditz
just a suggestion. Update soon.

P.S. Vegeta uke forever!
neko-karasu
2007-02-20 . chapter 2
OMG PLEASE CONTINUE! its great so far >w
Animelover6000
2007-02-20 . chapter 4
hey aww you brok it off in the middle of the lemon scene. meanie. but anyways i love the story its different. so anyways please write more soon. thanks and bye:D
GOKU-LUV
2006-11-14 . chapter 3
GOOD STORY WRITE MORE!
Spidersting
2006-01-11 . chapter 3
Who's Vegeta's mate that he's referring to?
Spidersting
2006-01-11 . chapter 1
Wait... How is it they're meeting in a restaurant? What's the alternate universe we're in here?
demonlover11
2005-03-16 . chapter 2
Another great writer of !
*bows*
So lucky are you to have such great talent!

Anyhow please if you will write more!
this is a very sparkly story.

You have my face pasted to the screen **as always**
TTFN
kiroshi no tenshi
2005-01-10 . chapter 2
Yay, it's good so far. I hope you get to write some more soon =^__^= Yay. Bye bye
(>^_^)>
luv-blonde-bunny
2005-01-05 . chapter 2
hey honny!! love the story! and honny, i'm telling you, if you don't finish this story i will be monumentally PO'ed!! i totally love your story and i really hope to read more of it.
keep on writing,
luv-blonde-bunny
State Hopper
2005-01-01 . chapter 1
uhm Ithink you need to format this>?
Yit-Ha
2004-12-31 . chapter 2
Aww, this is such a cute fic! Do Vegeta and Goku know about that saiyan thig? Actually, where does this take place?
Albino Black Sheep
2004-12-29 . chapter 2
I'm a little confused. Do they actually KNOW they're saiyajins yet? O.o

Anywho, great fic so far!
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