I've just read this whole triology in the last few days and I must say I really really love it!
I loved how you ended it with what happened when they were at each age, and not how they were actually killed by Voldemort.
I don't think it's possible to chose a favourite quote, so many of them are really funny and just perfect for the point in the story..
On a scale of ten, i would probably rate this an eight or a nine :)

i absolutely positively loved it! you're a brilliant writer!

Ok this is the ABSOLUTE BEST STORY EVER WRITTEN! Can not read more than this chapter because the story is WAYY to good to finish. I totally miss all the awesome characters and friends lily had. This story will always be my favorite and i hope one i will get myself together and finally finish this story. but i know i would be balling my little eyes out!! Any way thanks for writing such a wonderful story that i will truly never forget. :D

You know what...I've read this so many times...and I still cry when they die...

-shrieks in hysterics- This is like...my fourth time reading this...AND I STILL HATE YOU FOR KILLING RACHEL.TAYLOR.JACKIE.BRAD.JULIE.MATT.KIERA.NAT. T_T

this is my second tuime reading this series and i still had some tears...thanks

Wow. The ending of this story is pretty intense. I was almost crying. Very well written!

I'm sad you didn't tell what happened to sirius/fank/alice/remus after their death... :(

Great story though

loved all three in this series. read the first, only intending to read that one. when i finished it, i HAD to read the second, and didnt think i'd read the third. then of course, i couldnt stop myself. i love the two final scenes: james and lily v. peter and the summary at the end...almost made me cry! so, fabulous job, i realy enjoyed these. keep up the amazing work!

this story was great and the end was perfect, i have been dreading this chapter scince the begining of being 16 isn't as easy as it sounds, this story was definitly your best! its just so sad that they have to die! i hate jk rowling for doing that to me, well not really because without it there would be no harry potter, and this story wouldn't even exsist! ok that was of topic
great story you should write more lily james fics

when you said sirius's fine thick hair it doesn't make any sense because it can't be fine and thick

I know its a bit late, but I love this story and all the ones before it. I think the way you let the reader see the development of the characters without actually describing it is brilliant. I also love the way you write sad parts - some of them actually made me cry!

Keep writing and good luck!!

Nice story, very nice. I especially liked the therapy session. It was brilliant. However, I just can't imagine Peter in the last scene, I mean, he's such a cowards he wouldn't have the balls to tell them all of that, would he? He would've just hid and let Voldemort kill them, wouldn't he?

Anyway, outstanding piece of work, well done!

Cheers

Kristen Black
Miembro de la OIrden Siriusana

Favorite story:Being An Adult Isn’t As Easy As It Sounds

Favorite plot: lily/james wedding and the events afterwards

Favorite quote (s): pretty much anything Sirius said

Favorite character created by Rowling expanded upon by me : Sirius

Favorite character created by me: I liked Scott, Viv and Mrs. Jones, but i also like the girls(Rachel, Jackie and Taylor) Katie

Favorite side character expanded upon by me : Frank

What would you rate this story on a scale of one to ten? The other two stories? This one: 9 being 17:9 being 16:8

How can I improve my writing? I love your writing but sometimes there are vents such as the potters death or the events after the l/j wedding where you are so entangled with the plot that the emotions of the characters are lost in the mix.

I loved the 3 stories you wrote. Good job