Up date soon. I like it

Hey, update! It's a good story here!

now you have to update... unless you want my religious finatics after you.

great job! wow that was deep, can't wait for chanoer 5!! ^.^

good chapter, i love Erol, the way u write him is, is well awsome

Hi! Updateyness! Yay! Heh, my home internet is broken so I read this in college. Good chapter! *glomps* But...no descripition of the best bit... *smicks pervy voices in her head* But now I got something to think about in class! ^_^ Just better not get caught!

Ih! Me loves! ^__^

mrr? *gasp* aw... you love me?! ^-^ *light blush and sticks out tounge* danke! *purrs at the fic* GAH! >.< how dare you not write in the best part! *uses imagination for a second...* ... ... >.>; well... leaving it to my sick and twisted mind is a good thing too... *goes back to mental visualizations* o.< gah... *drools* ... actually... this fic is not considered late... o.O; yes... people are lazy on *hands you food and motivational pictures... >.>; of a sexy jak.. and... other things...* pwease attempt at whacking the writers block! (if it comes back) and yes... school work is a pain... >.>; *looks at the pile that i SHOULD be doing... instead of reading... fanfiction...* ... *scoots the pile away* ^_^ time to RE-READ the fic! *runs off to do that*

Update... NOW! Or come back to your computer so we can RP darnit!

nvmd about the note thing...i just found it from the end of chapter four...lol

Sigh, I think I must kick my ** back into gear and do another chapter. I just got the game back a few days ago. I lent it to my cousin for 3 DAYS...she kept it much to long...3 days my butt. so, I do have an excuse. That and school...I hate chemistry...bleck.

Alright, some Jak/Erol luvvin! Me likes! Me likes!

I think they luv each other, I think they want to hug each other, I think they want to Kiss each other, I think they want to do...other...THINGS...with each other...well yeah. 'Tis great! Me loves it! I'm glad you updated, and I make your heart go flutter...*THE POWER*

BWAHHAHAA!

okay...this has been a really really long review. I tend to leave you long ones...yeah...again again...I really really like it!

YAY!

*Squeals LOUDLY!*
You put up chappie 3! YAYAYAYAYAYAY! *dances*

I LUV IT!

hm...Erol shut off the turrets...hmm...bwahahha!

I'm gonna go read chappie 4 now, and my DA page is

if you wanted to know. Leave me a note, and I'll visit yours..I couldnt find it by meself...

GOOD CHAPTER AGAIN...k, goes off to happily read chapter four

Yay! I've finally found another good erol/jak fic. There are not enough of these. Please update soon.

YAYS! Give me more erol! *stitches fevorously on the erol-doll* AND SOMEONE FIND ME A DECENT PICTURE OF EROLS COSTUME!! I WANT MY PLUSHIE PERFECT! oh.. and by the way artist whos name escapes me, I love the chappy and wanted to tell you that *gets grabbed by the asilum people kicking and screaming!!* NU! I WANT EROL! oh.. morphine...

XD! LOVE the new chapter! Put tne next one up soon! Please! Also, I saw your Deviant account a while ago. Your "What Not To Wear" picture of Erol inspired several comics! Oh! And I'll get the fanart up soon. My Dev. account is . I have two pictures up, but they're from a few months ago. I'm much better now.

XD ErolxJak goodness! I luv this story so far, and I'm looking forward to reading more!

BTW, the 3rd chapter gave me a fanart idea! The world needs more JakxErol art! Woot!

~Kyoko