 openwindow2 2006-07-23 . chapter 1HAHA! AWESOME STORY! (though i prefer inoshika to temarishika, this story is just too well written!!)
XD
SO going on my favs!! |
 Blakrose 2006-07-21 . chapter 1 This is great. But who is the kid with Gaara, did I miss something? |
 JrEMPRESSofDrkness 2006-06-15 . chapter 1I love this piece so much. It's definitely a favorite. The interaction between Shikamaru and Temari was hilarious. |
 Midnight-sama 2006-04-03 . chapter 1XD Oh my... Now that was funny! |
 viceleah 2006-03-18 . chapter 1It was really enjoyable... ah... it's kind of cute too... wonder who the child is? Must've been Gaara's kid. |
 Flame-Kunoichi 2005-09-04 . chapter 1LOVE LOVE LOVE! i found this fic on your lj first, and its on whoo! *dance* here, have a cookie! *hands chocolate chip cookie* |
 Kindre Turnany 2005-03-13 . chapter 1I think that was the funniest thing I've ever read... and the only reason I can speak calmly now is because I died of laughter lond before the end. |
 Sailor Comet 2005-03-13 . chapter 1Good god, that fic was funny. From where Shikamaru asks if they have "real men" from where Temari comes from, all the way to the end. Hilarious little fic here. ^_^
~Sam |
 boshums 2005-01-07 . chapter 1You know, I think Gaara actually would be OK with small children almost. That, or reading this made me think as such. Idunno. Good job, as always. I do ever so enjoy your writing style =] |
 Mercedes no Inuarai 2004-12-17 . chapter 1*LOL* I absolutely adore the way you write Gaara.
That was classic, poor Shikamaru. Two of the quickest minds from either Vilage tussling around on the floor like two angry cats.
Great description and flow of dialogue. We get a great visual of the scenes. |
 crimson nightmare 2004-12-17 . chapter 1LOL~ (Dies of laughing) This is one disfunctional family. A |
 Serryn 2004-07-18 . chapter 1rofl |
 lily day 2004-07-15 . chapter 1Gah! I loved that! I'm so proud of you, my lvely little slasher has done het! Yey! And I agree, Temari rocks the casbah. |
 Yuen-chan 2004-07-15 . chapter 1 It totally confused me, but I liked it. Who was the little kid? And I don't think Shika was lazy enough... |
 Me-la Kenzu Chan 2004-07-14 . chapter 1Very graphically funny. I'm shocked that this was only PG 13. The child questioning Shika's and Temari's actions was kawaii! |