great story, please update soon

well for dyls tril mabey make it like paiges but like diff in some way . do i get my cookie ?:) -amanda

wow awesome story plz keep going

that was great keep up the good work

Krystalus/Bree

O la la. M ore please!

Great story I love it!

hey, this story has pretty cool ideas and stuff. but some details were really really off to me... i'm sorry if you get offended but stuff like this:

"Dyl, you want me to lube you up or do you think it will bring back horrible memories or your rape?"

seems really unrealistic. it's kinda of...i don't know how to explain it but little things like that turned me away from the story. well anyways, the story line is pretty cool but i think you should work on making the dialogue and character reactions in general, more realistic/believable/understandable. i must sound like a complete jerk...

I've read Chapters 1-3 so far and am in awe at how you have this going! I mean Dylan being raped, making out with Tom. I don't know what got into Marco, because he didn't even hear the whole story. I wonder what will happen with them. I like it so far!

i've enjoyed this story quite a bit and can hardly wait for the next parts

i feel for marco, especially since his mom seemed rather understanding in the beginning -- maybe it would be for the best if he didn't go back to them, but, depending on marco's age, they *should* be held accountable for his financial upkeep until he either reaches 18 (or, if he goes to college, 21/graduation)-- although i freely admit that i don't know what the laws in canada have to say about things like this

when it comes to dylan's trial, with little/no evidence (did he tell the cops or see a doc immediately? i don't recall you mentioning it), a conviction would probably come down to the jury having to winnow through a 'he said; no *he* said' type of deal that might get the rapist off -- it's hard telling, especially since i'm no lawyer

good luck with your muse, and please update soon!

i think its cool that you keep them together through everything its the best. Maybe you could have dylan break down and stuff like that and reverse the roles in the next chapter.

hi i just read all six of your current chapters 2day and i liked the story. sorry i dont have any ideas 4 u maybye next time though?

Hey, killer story. I can't wait to see where you take it. Update soon, Peace.

Great work! I think marco's mom is OCC here b/c from what we saw of her she doesent seem that she would do that. As for ideas for the trial maybe you could use some material they used for paige's trial. Or something along the line where the court lets him say something to his rapist and he just spills it out. But overall this rocks! Update soon!

great story please update soon

this is a great story please hurry up with the next chaptor