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| Luv2write4u13 2005-07-26 ch 1, | abuseThis was a really good story. I'm glad that JT cared enough to talk to her and I'm glad that Paige kept telling Ashley how sick she was of her complaining and stuff |
| CreativeMind 2004-07-25 ch 1, | abuseCan't believe it you are so talented at writing. This story is like a beutiful peice of art that I can't stop looking at. Though it may be kinda depressing it was great. I LOVE IT! |
| Dark Spell 2004-07-20 ch 2, | abuseInteresting idea, with Manny leaving and everything, especially with her last call to Emma and talking about the history of her friends with Alice. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, good work. |
| americangirl 2004-07-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was a very well written first chapter.I hope to read more of your work soon. |
| Dense 2004-07-14 ch 1, | abusethat was great. very intense, very realistic. kinda depressin' when i think about it, but i guess that's how it goes. you are a great writer and the song really fitted in well. |