man that was funny. i love bloopers, oh i have one.


Kyo:hey Yuya, u like yo mama jokes?
Yuya: um...okay?
Kyo: yo mama's so fat that when she was swimming in the ocean, the whales started singing WE ARE FAMILY, EVEN THOUGH YOU'RE FATTER THAN ME ...

lol :)

uhh, if u're evil, did u make the story evil as well? O.o

poor kyo, it's so bad that kyoshiro and kyo both came out of kyo's body. poor Yuya

Oh, very lovely story! Love the character development :) you did a wonderful job.

although this is old... just want to say that I loved the story ^_^

this was a great story i loved it. great work.

That was funny! GO GATORS!

Wonderful!

This was a wonderfully written story. It's sad that Saizo died but I like that Yuya and Kyo's first born was named after him.

why should there be any matter of offense. feeling are feelings. who are we to judge them, validate or invalidate them for that matter anyway?

nice story

Hello Eternity. Um, I've always loved your fan fictions. I really do want to review on them, but, where are you? Sorry I couldn't support you on your way through the chapters of fan fictions, really gommenasai. Hm, the ending fight was quite nice, and yeah, it was just like Hotaru. He he, he's cute to write, yeah. :) . I've always felt something when I read it. It's just like a very nice novel, and it just feels like the original people who made it. He he, very good work in your fics, neh. Ganbatte for more, neh. Hope to seeing you again. :)
~Hakusa

aw...that was an awesome and cute ending...i love it...you did an awesome job on this fanfic...I'm so in love with it...

...S-U-G-O-I !...O_O...its ubber sad that i have to stop reading this story (becuz it ended...not becuz it bad or anything...which it is NOT!)...buyt i think the ending is aVERY fitting endin for this story!

aww... how cute! i loved it