why naruto why...

I really didn't get it at first but when I re-read it a few more times, I'm kinda getting the idea on what it's about

fantastic job :D

o.o I like it, but

...I'm just confused.

Wow, I don't even know what to say. A bit depressing, but really great. That was really well-written, and the pacing was really good. I love the style it was written in.

That was really cute, I liked the way you wrote it. :D

If he found out.. something would die inside of him

you probably already know, but there is another story with this one shot as a first chapter. i found the multich. story and i found it absolutely genious and just now at this very moment i found yours and even both are really similar you are the original autrhor for this plot and let me tell you... you have such a great imagination, i can practicaly see them, every breath, the fear, the hesitation and is beautiful. i absolutely love it. you have a great talent and i assure you i will look for your profile to read more of your stories cuz you just now how to catch a moment just by writing it i cant wait to read more from you...PERFECT!!

whoa. that was incredible. it was written so well, keeping me in suspense the whole time. it me a little bit to understand what Sasuke and Sakura were going to do, though. ;)
beautiful oneshot. :3

OMFG I LOVED IT... ive been waiting for this for like forever... can you add more or a sequel.. were they do "it" an then sakura goes in and "seduces" and like how she avoids answering narutos questions bout how they figured it out or something and like oh my gawd... PLEASE

That one was a really good one. You should try and make a sequal to this. If you did it would turn out really good.

That was deep. I loved it!

Not sure how I found this, but it's incredible. The characters are wonderfully done, and it's easy to believe Sasuke and Sakura would do so much to rescue Naruto.

Livi

It's strange the way you've written the regret in this story. The regret itself is sad, but beautiful, the way it ties together with the themes. I liked the small signs of affection between Team 7. I also agree, Sakura's such a versatile character to write about.

Keep up the good work.
~Amulet

Lovely. It gave me shivers as I read it.

well, it gave me shivers and made me cry. That's all I can say because I can't really think straight. lol It hurts a little.