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| Unlucky-amulet 2008-07-29 ch 1,  | abuseIt's strange the way you've written the regret in this story. The regret itself is sad, but beautiful, the way it ties together with the themes. I liked the small signs of affection between Team 7. I also agree, Sakura's such a versatile character to write about. Keep up the good work. ~Amulet |
| Starry Vere 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abuseLovely. It gave me shivers as I read it. |
| a thousand cranes 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abusewell, it gave me shivers and made me cry. That's all I can say because I can't really think straight. lol It hurts a little. |
| MadaMag 2008-02-14 ch 1, | abuseVery good fic. I wonder, if Naruto would free himself, would Sasuke or Sakura regret their action in future? |
| Lady Lark 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseSuch an amazing story. So chilling in its simplicity. I've read this before, several times in fact, but have some how failed to review it. It really is so good. I like Kakashi's trying to find any other way, Tsunade's advise, and Sakura's quiet determination. So good, yet so poignant. Just lovely. |
| shelwyn 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abuseSaskue is awsome lier! |
| MM-Kokopelli 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseThis was wonderful. It was angsty and brilliant and I loved it because it was so beautiful. You got everything down, including the not-quite-almost SasuSaku. I don't know why I haven't reviewed this yet (I probably thought I already did). It's so lovely. |
| naruto.luv.llamas 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseno offense but i dont really get it... |
| Magic Crystal Rose 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseLovey story. I really enjoyed it. |
| Merridaine 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseWow |
| Cheerio-panda45 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuseCall me dumb, but the first time I read this, I was so confused! As I read it again, and thought about it, I was like, "Wow. this was really cool." just the format, the way you did it made it so cool. It really added to the angst, for me anyway. I really wish it had more chapters, but it was an awesome oneshot! I look forward to more work from you! |
| AkatsukiDEMONangel 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuseegh...i dont get it...what does all of this mean? |
| nhyn 2007-05-06 ch 1, anon. | abusei don't get it |
| Essyllus 2007-05-01 ch 1, | abuseM, I love the subtlety. It made me think, and I loved how the plot worked behind the scenes. I loved Sakura and Sasuke's characterization. It makes me want more. Beautiful job. |
| Mr. Despair 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuseHeartbreaking, yeah. Good title. I can think of a million ways it can be applied. I like how it was set. When something stomach churning like this happens, and a significant moment is about to happen, you reflect, think "why?", regret, and ignoring it all, push further. Because, that is what you have to do. Because, in the end, they all have each other. They'd do anything. They all would, and that is perhaps the most significant thing, because that didn't use to be true. The truth in this, the sacrifice, truly deserves the tears. Tears that aren't actually being shed, because it's so straight forward, true, and strong. Crying is...weakness. Crying will only be on the inside, right now. |