Ah poor Melchiah. Return to the wheel dearly departed soul.

Pity all of them, quite actually...

Nice piece of fiction ! I do urge you to write more. You made such a fiction interesting. Because in my case, I've never liked Melchiah, but you got me into reading it. Which is a task hard enough in itself ! *lol* Anywho, do write more...

P e a c e
Elven High Priestess of Procrastination
Ri~kun

This is a marvellous little insight. I was never a Melchiah sympathiser, but this was poignant and very well-written. ^_^

Don't listen to the detractors. I loved your story. It is an interesting take on a portion of the game.
I'd like to see your take on the other brothers.

I thought I already reviewd this... I read it so long ago and it's great! I'm desperate to find good SR fics, so thankx a lot! ^^

This is, I think, what convinced me that poor Melchiah wasn't all bad. He just had a tough break. (But you should have tried to explain that to me when I had to fight him in Soul Reaver!)

That's odd, I am sure I reviewed this before, yet I cannot find my review anywhere.... How odd!
Anyway, I absolutely LOVE this fic. It is bloody excellent. It is very well-written and thoughtful.
I love Melchiah to bits, I've always felt sorry for him, poor darling.

That was absolutely awesome. I love it. You're an excellent writer. I can't find anything wrong with it.

Once again, I love your work. You wrote this so well, it is as if you are Melchiah himself... :)

Also another well written story, it`s true there are little things to the way
you write that adds atmosphere to the story and Nosgoth.
This one I read at the realm but, not being a member I had to come
here to drop a line. Excellent stories, you should find a publisher.

ooo, i like it! very good job!

I keep reading this story, and even though I know most of it, it STILL makes me cry!! It's written so beautifully, and I just feel you did an excellent job of portraying Melchiah!!! Keep up the good work!
~*~-Ripperette-~*~

Still a very good story! Melchiah doesn't get near enough sympathy; you did a great job writing from his perspective, Arafel.

I really liked this fic. Its has a very well writen stlye. This a good interpretaion of Melchiah's thoughts. He would feel shame and revultion. I get same feeling when I see the rancor from Return of the Jedi and when I see Melchiah. Though its kind of stupid that he fell for the old sharp metal gate act twice and then a grinder. The rancor was killed in one quick blow in Retrun of the Jedi and that thing couldn't even talk.

Good to see your stories posted here !
They deserve as wide an audience as possible.
Little Brother is probably the best LoK fan fic ever made.
Thanks for posting Ch. 7 of Broken Wings, it's another very well written
installment of the story. So far Broken Wings has also been some of
the most creative (and most belieable) of all the LoK fics.
Good luck on writing more. Please post further installments here too. :)