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Sakura123
2008-03-09
ch 25,
abuseWow, I mean, wow. This was an awesome story... really. I loved the description of the Universe and the Advent of Rachel (who pnwd's Car Hoods), who was a decidedly compelling character with a CABEL complex (Prosthetics and all) - without the trigger happiness and Big F*ING Gun (pardon the description). I loved her breakdown moment and the inclusion of the Astral Plane. Even with the lack of Ororo in the story, you managed to bring other characters like Jubilee, Kitty, Bobby and Rogue into the forefront without making them seem like extra characters to fill up writing space if you catch my meanin'.

I loved your characterizations of Mystique, Magneto, Xavier, Logan, Kurt, and Scott Summers (who I am so glad, wasn't a simpering mess of "mourning" like he's portrayed in most Post-X2 Fanfiction. I've got nothing against that characterization sometimes, but it gets tiresome [sometimes just from reading the summaries]).

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“Ah, Kitty Pryde, girl genius! She has the ability to make a weapon of mass destruction out of a toaster.” Kitty yawned. “So what kind of job does she get? Chauffer. “Professor Xavier is a jerk.” - I just noticed that quote...!
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All in all I enjoyed your story!
Kee Up the good work!
Sakura123
2008-03-09
ch 11,
abuseO_O...Please tell me Rachel isn't related to Scott Summers. If so - guh - that was just too damn disturbing...(Incest Moment).


Reading more now...
Sakura123
howdy
2006-06-04
ch 1, anon.
abusewait a minute, I thought Robert Kelly was dead? Good story anyway.
xxPastelSTARxx
2005-09-21
ch 25,
abusewow, great story. i couldn't stop reading. i actually found your X4 first, so i wondered what you wrote up for your X3. anyway, i really enjoyed your writing. keep up the good work.
Kryptonite
2005-03-02
ch 25,
abuseNice ending. Cute. Though I didn't like the fact that Rachel died, but I guess it had to happen, didn't it?
Gripfang-Wildblade
2005-02-14
ch 25,
abuseOverall an excellent story.
The ending was a bit lacking though. Where was the Pheonix? What about Gambit, what happened to him and Rouge? And what about Bobby?
I felt like I had been led through a long wonderful maze only to have the end cut off in front of me.
I really hope you plan on doing a sequel. I don't think I could handle it otherwise.

Much props though..
darkstorm5000
2005-02-07
ch 25,
abuseGreat chapter! Nice ending, with most everything being resolved. I liked the twinkie bit with Scott and Hank the most.

Now, you left me intrigued about what the news from Cairo was? I imagine it could be a number of things, but hopefully you'll tell us in a future story.

Anyways, you did a good job with your story and you should feel very proud of yourself. I can't wait for whatever it is you come up with next...
Silverone3
2005-02-06
ch 25,
abuse::grin::
darkstorm5000
2005-01-30
ch 24,
abuseNice chapter! You did a pretty good job handling the astral sequence, and with Xavier and Scott going into Rachel's mind. I also liked the subtle classic comment from Kitty on board the Blackbird too.
Silverone3
2005-01-28
ch 23,
abusevery interesting I like this chapter I lot-
I'm sorry i haven't been reviewing for awhile sorry!
darkstorm5000
2005-01-21
ch 23,
abuseNice chapter, what with Wolverine getting shot in the head again, and Nightcrawler and Mystique having their moment. I really liked Magneto's offer to reshape Wolverine's skeleton, pretty wicked stuff. Anyways, can't wait to see how Rachel'll fare going into the mind of someone like Magneto...
darkstorm5000
2005-01-16
ch 22,
abuseNice Nightcrawler/Sabretooth scene, dancing partners or not. So the truth is slowly coming out about Rachel's past/future, can't wait to see what other surprises she ends up revealing to them...
Wen1
2005-01-11
ch 21,
abuseI must have missed an episode, I don't remenber Cyclops knowing for Rachel...
Wen
darkstorm5000
2005-01-10
ch 21,
abuseCool stuff, especially with the Wolverine/Mystique fight, and with her showing her maternal 'nurturing' side. I also liked Rachel finally revealing the truth to her Dad too. Can't wait to see what's next...
Rogue200315
2005-01-10
ch 21,
abuseomg write the next chapter before i go insane. I love your story and i figured that rachel was scotts daughter cuz i have been doing research on the x-men...i kinda got my self hooked on their stories adn stuff...i'm even writing my own story.but hurry up and upate plz!
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