great story!

i really loved reading it... i put it as one of my favorites...

tnx for making this story!

lol omg i just imagined the god in this story to be hiko.. :))

That's a great story xD Love the ending.

this is just a great story!good writing!!
this actually reminds me of the butterfly effect
with the time turning and stuff. but hell!

awed,it was SO cute.I love the this story from the begining until end.-Hugs- you make a great story.I hope to see more of your story(Well,I checked i when I'm not too bussy -wink-) anyway great story

Poor Kenshin...

I LOVE this story! And yes, I like the original ending (I'm a huge fan of irony) and I liked the other one as well... It's so sad that this story is over... I've been reading it since you posted it...

you kno wat? the only reason your english teacher or wathever didn't like it is because she's an **! I've read 'dear diary' and i really liked it! What an ** teacher!

Dearest Alendra,

I'm so sorry I wasn't here when your English Teacher shot you down. It's hard to have someone tell you so harshly that something you've worked on so diligently isn't worth their time. Just try to remember, you are an author in training. You are still learning what 'plot' and 'structure' are. A diary or journal is probably the most difficult premise to try and base a plot on. I haven't read 'Dear Diary' yet, but I will. Don't give up... keep writing. You can only get better the more you practice. Don't let one person tell you you're not good. Teacher's only look at pure structure. They do not necessarily look at content, and they surly do not look at fanfiction characters the way 'we' do. They have no identification with Kenshin and Kaoru. Remember that. Plus, they have nothing vested in you either. We do.
Sorry, I missed your birthday.
Love you, koishii. This story ended well.
God bless,
Tsuki-san

Aw...that was a sweet ending and yeh, she did complete her job as a guardian angel, but i wonder why they made her human. Is it that they think she should still be his guardian angel and protect him forever? Anywayz, it was a good story so i liked it. But sumhow it sounds like there could be a sequel thou i don like stories when there are sequels so if there is i wont read it anywayz b/c i think if u truly did end a story then it's the ending and don pull it further cuz whenever u do dat, it just ruins the reader's opinion bout the original story. Well just keep the end as it is.

Well, that ending was abrupt. I've followed your story since you first posted it and I have to say I expected a better ending or at least something that didn't feel rushed and, you know, just placed there to end the story. Anyway, I still enjoyed it and thanks for finishing it and not just abandoning it.

Your story was awsome! You are a very talented writer. Good job!

This story was so good! I like the halo idea. It'd be a nice touch. But that's just my opinion. Anyway, I know how you feel about honors classes. I'm in pretty much the highest level classe you can take, and it's KILLING ME. I hate it! And English is actually the opposite for me, we write more than we read, but it's mainly essays and stupid short answer questions. Pointless. Anyway, my point is, I feel your pain, my friend. (Even though I don't know you.) Well, thatnk you for finishing this story, it made me very happy. Bye!

Wow, you have a mean teacher! My Honors 10 English Class is all writing and no reading. It makes me sad. You hate reading? Wow, I love reading! I don't like writing! But I guess that's why your the author and I'm reading and reviewing. I thought that was a great way to end the story. Don't listen to your teacher (wow that sounds like bad advice) I think your a great writer! Just look at all your fans! Anyway, the only bad thing about this chapter is that it's the last. I checked everyday to see if you updated and now that your done...Oh well, all good things come to an end. Good luck on all of your other stories! (and with your jerk of an English teacher.) :)

! fantastic ending. this reminded me of the butterfly effect, if i havent told u b4. lol.
THAT TEACHER IS A S-O-B! She has no right to say that when your work is incredible! Dont listen to her, she's prolly just a stupid butthole. Keep writing!!