Aww, that was sweet. I love SuperShy!Luigi. And I have to agree, it is pretty obvious. Like it says in your story, love is admiration's logical next step.

MY GOSH! you made me cry! What a rare event *ahem* do forgive me.
I loved it a truly wonderful story it made me feel not only over powered with passion but emotion as well!

My god, these two are just the most adorable pairing ever. I loved the way you wrote this; I could really feel how shy and timid Luigi was. Just fantastic all around.

I love it actually

Orginally I used to be against LxP thing, but I guess that's only in fanart which I don't like but this story is an excaption ^_^

I've always thought of Luigi to be secretly bi since he crossdresses xD

And I love Peasley! Top favorite Mario character there :3(followed by Luigi obviously)

I guess I like green guys XD

Anyway, keep up the good work! ^_^

I always enjoy reading a slash, straight pairings are just...meh...

I don't know what makes me like this fic, but I like this fic. And let me tell you, I'm not really a fan of the PxL paring. But the way you described everything, the way you painted your story with your words, I just could not help but love your story. It was sweet, tender, and cute.

Keep on writing, because you have quite a talent there!

I really liked this story and this paring. Shy Luigi with the not shy Prince Peasley. ^__^ Thanks for making it.

WAI X3 so cute, so cute and WELL WRITTEN! tghank you so much for that lovely little scenario! *dances happily*

Quiet, little toad.

you nasty bitch i hope you fucking go hell because you know luigi is my man. my name is really i have been lovin' luigi since i was 3 years old now if youexcuse i have to blam some other stories with yaoi and yuri.

Very, very cute. I'm interested in your characterizations of Luigi and Peasley. Luigi really is an overall cute character. ^^ And I like how your Peasley is such a gentleman. ^^

I've seen your Peasley/Luigi fanart as well. (Though I should comment on them at deviantart sometime)This has to be the first pairing that (I think) is categorized as slash. (I know the difference between slash and shounen-ai) I hope you make more of this pairing! ^^

Oh man, this is just too... Cute is so not strong enough... Completely adorable is closer. Anyways! I love this fic so much! No complaints here... And I have no clue which song you were using, but it personally reminds me of a song called "Magic Tower" in the game Bust A Groove. So anyways, excellent fic; excellent job! ^.^

wow That is one sweet little slash story. Girl folk are not ot be trusted...so they love all over each other. ;__; Seriously well written, touching story, though I think the story went a litle too far with the Luigi being shy deal. It was just...to much. Sure, Luigi's shy, but jeez! We know he talks once in a while, more than Mario even. He's not THAT introverted. I still like Luigi was written, though. I always thought of him as a garderner to with a green thumb, it's cute how they share that interest.

And the snogging: Priceless. Just pure priceless wonderful fluff.

Great job! Keep up the good work.

Heh,well at least this is good,though
I was searching for Bowser/Luigi.
Good ficlet!

Ah! So cute! Your descriptions are so great and I love the whole Luigi/Peasley idea! You wouldn't be offended if I asked if you could review my Luigi/Daisy fic would you? Luigi fans unite!

That was brilliant :D